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Old 04-07-2016, 08:08 PM   #13
Adverse
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Infil:
I be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
^ cool cool.

U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
^ kind of light.

You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
^ decent decent but I agree with the others that the wording could have been better

I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
^ pretty nice tbh

Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
^ dope.

Ur bitch huge takin selfies. devourin food every damn photo
That fuckin Mastodon go heavy in the midriff and I ain't talkin no metal band solo
^ meh

On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone
^ I thought this was cool. Not the hardest closer but cool

Bar:
nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
^ aright decent way to start

an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
^ Decent

end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
^ okay

truth is I signed in cuz wtf else is there to do lately?
so watch me destroy Infancy how he resembles an abused baby
^ cool line

cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds
^ cool as fuck

really ur a fagt w/ a bf who's love is unmistakable dog
he's gotta crush on ur nuts & u smile.. that's an unbreakable Bond
^ ehhh lol

inf aka trag vs barc aka Cro; fear ur hardest enemy
trademarked corpses w/ steak knives, I'm here to carve ur leg a C
^ i didn't feel this really

Overall i'm going give it to Bar just because the overall verse was better all the way through, nothing against Infil's verse, I think bar just hit harder, good battle fellas

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