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Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228
Champed - NWL Season 2
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MVGT Just Write
Kudos to both pieces. Creative story lines that required absolutely original approaches. Just Writes tale was heart warmingly dope. Great attention to detail. Highly enjoyable read due to a formidable combination of natural story telling and his versatile ability to bring the picture to life like a pixar movie. True topical writing. A far cry from last weeks "played out" appeal, this idea was totally fresh and all your own. Hats off. Mr. J followed suit and I commend his worthwhile effort that ultimately felt like an inspired spin off of his opponents verse. It was going to be tough to take down Just Write using a similar approach as him. Just Write basically embodied the concept. After reading Just Write piece, Mr. Js verse felt like a continuation, rehasing and summarizing points his opponent already made. Mr. J went as far as to individually count out each of Just Writes lines, which leads me to be believe he was doomed from the beginning, falling victim to the curse of reading your opponents work before hand.
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