Week 5: Just Write vs. Mr. J (JUST WRITE WINS 6-1)

2tripple0 · 04-05-2016, 07:34 AM

Okay this was a bit confusing I thought you guys did a great job and I'm trying to think what wasn't appetizing in your pieces and for me just write had a more common verse that didn't feel as scrambled as Mr j so for me because Mr j's verse was hard to follow along as the story progressed because of its length I think it could have tied into topic more visably I am might have given you my vote but because it was harder to find his pieces faults I'm giving it to just write

Vote.....just write

04-05-2016, 07:34 AM	#4
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Okay this was a bit confusing I thought you guys did a great job and I'm trying to think what wasn't appetizing in your pieces and for me just write had a more common verse that didn't feel as scrambled as Mr j so for me because Mr j's verse was hard to follow along as the story progressed because of its length I think it could have tied into topic more visably I am might have given you my vote but because it was harder to find his pieces faults I'm giving it to just write Vote.....just write __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/