Infiltration 8-3 vs Barcotic 0-0 - BARCOTIC WINS

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@Infiltration vs @Barcotic

[Barcotic]

yo

pics? either way 16ish, lemme kno

[Saint]

I'm down for a roast, cuz that BR finals is also 16 regs

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by Infiltration

I'm down for a roast, cuz that BR finals is also 16 regs

not really down for a roast bruh, I'd rather diss my opponent tbh

new pics of each other or we can go reg but less lines if need be

[Saint]

12? Or ill match

[Saint]

I be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
Ur bitch huge takin selfies. devourin food every damn photo
That fuckin Mastodon go heavy in the midriff and I ain't talkin no metal band solo
On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone

14 @Orc

[Barcotic]

8-3 w/ losses to nik, tic & jilti ...

I mean

nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
truth is I signed in cuz wtf else is there to do lately?
so watch me destroy Infancy how he resembles an abused baby
cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds
really ur a fagt w/ a bf who's love is unmistakable dog
he's gotta crush on ur nuts & u smile.. that's an unbreakable Bond
inf aka trag vs barc aka Cro; fear ur hardest enemy
trademarked corpses w/ steak knives, I'm here to carve ur leg a C

...

[Habitat]

Infiltration
I be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
-nice
U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
-not sure if this is true but the punch came across as kinda weak. Lite
You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
-cro shade is dope but the wording is not doing the qp justice. lite
I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
-I mean I get it, but how u gonna stretch someones skull down their shirt? It's a made up phrase that makes ur punch work, and I cna't give credit for it.
Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
-again I just don't see tellin someone u gonna stretch them out as a viable threat unless ur working the dungeons in the dark ages. i get the punch but Im just not digging this
Ur bitch huge takin selfies. devourin food every damn photo
That fuckin Mastodon go heavy in the midriff and I ain't talkin no metal band solo
-lite
On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone
-nahbro not diggin this

Barcotic
nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
-not hard hitting this is lite
an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
-I like this
end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
-Shoulda tied in with the opener more. lite
truth is I signed in cuz wtf else is there to do lately?
so watch me destroy Infancy how he resembles an abused baby
-ok this was decent
cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds
-not diggin this
really ur a fagt w/ a bf who's love is unmistakable dog
he's gotta crush on ur nuts & u smile.. that's an unbreakable Bond
-yooo this is straight fire lol damn LOTB
inf aka trag vs barc aka Cro; fear ur hardest enemy
trademarked corpses w/ steak knives, I'm here to carve ur leg a C
-not feelin this

This battle is semi close but I got Barcotic taking it fairly comfortably. That unbreakable bond shit was fucking fire and LOTB.

v - barcotic

[SHECK WES]

be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
this was cool I liked it
U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
not feelin this, everyone been having one of these in their verses lately
You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
ok here, had potential for more but wording hurt it
I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
ok flip, better than des' from last week that's for sure
Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
this is cool, more of s&f but still
Ur bitch huge takin selfies. devourin food every damn photo
That fuckin Mastodon go heavy in the midriff and I ain't talkin no metal band solo
wasnt feelin this
On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone
mm idk I wasn't feelin this much either


Vs



nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
alright
an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
oooo I liked this one lol
end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
ehh not feelin this one
truth is I signed in cuz wtf else is there to do lately?
so watch me destroy Infancy how he resembles an abused baby
ok not bad
cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds
alright
really ur a fagt w/ a bf who's love is unmistakable dog
he's gotta crush on ur nuts & u smile.. that's an unbreakable Bond
lmao gay but it works
inf aka trag vs barc aka Cro; fear ur hardest enemy
trademarked corpses w/ steak knives, I'm here to carve ur leg a C
decent

Inf had a couple good ones and a lot of s&f in that verse, after that Jilti battle he doesn't seem as into it, I don't blame him. Bar came pretty consistent here with a lot of good material. This goes to bar for that reason.

Vote Bartotic

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Infiltration

Editing, Fedora, Mandelbrot & closer.

Decent verse, a lot clever/creative concepts, it's just there wasn't any haymakers, none of your bars did significant damage to yo opponent. It read as if u weren't motivated to write, just going thru the motions.

versus

Originally Posted by Barcotic

Damien Marley, gravesite, Crash Bandicoot & James Bond.

Good verse, really clean & concise, plenty of clever punches, the misses weren't terrible & the ones that landed had some effective sting, nice showing.

Overall it's a close call, that could go either way, but I edge it to CROBAR.

[Cred]

Human bot fly was koo, skull stretched was nice, band solo hit

Vs

Reg eg koo, i liked it, gravesite, nicee. crash bandicoot was fire

This was a nice battle. Barcotic jus had the better verse here imo. Good shit tho my dudes.

Vote - Barcotic

[Useless]

U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion

--- this was a decent verse and prob would best most dudes, every line hit but the problem is that most were ehh. They were either played or the flip was mediocre. Crocheted coulda been fire with a better flip.


Vs.


--- I like all bar's line except the closer, it came off as awkward. Jillian was good, sonned in reg aye was cool, infancy was nice, lines revisited was a good personal, crash bandicoot was cool, unbreakable bond shoulda been set up better imo with a ref to the movie, only reason I knew what u was talkin about is cuz of the gif u had in ur sig or whatever lol. Overall tho nice verse.



V. Cronuts

[Adverse]

Infil:
I be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
^ cool cool.

U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
^ kind of light.

You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
^ decent decent but I agree with the others that the wording could have been better

I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
^ pretty nice tbh

Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
^ dope.

Ur bitch huge takin selfies. devourin food every damn photo
That fuckin Mastodon go heavy in the midriff and I ain't talkin no metal band solo
^ meh

On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone
^ I thought this was cool. Not the hardest closer but cool

Bar:
nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
^ aright decent way to start

an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
^ Decent

end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
^ okay

truth is I signed in cuz wtf else is there to do lately?
so watch me destroy Infancy how he resembles an abused baby
^ cool line

cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds
^ cool as fuck

really ur a fagt w/ a bf who's love is unmistakable dog
he's gotta crush on ur nuts & u smile.. that's an unbreakable Bond
^ ehhh lol

inf aka trag vs barc aka Cro; fear ur hardest enemy
trademarked corpses w/ steak knives, I'm here to carve ur leg a C
^ i didn't feel this really

Overall i'm going give it to Bar just because the overall verse was better all the way through, nothing against Infil's verse, I think bar just hit harder, good battle fellas

Vote - Bar

[Junto]

I be in the hood movin hot pies - ur a 'call the cops' guy
Dudes a top spy... Cro stays w/ bugs buried in his skin like a Human Bot Fly
I'm in all black w/ the fire - lookin like an assassin for hire
These 2 straps have ur skull stretched down ur shirt, that's Frank Castle's attire
Lift arms from the shoulder & stretch u out like dancer tops
My set zoom-in thru the scope when infinite... math nerds call that a Mandelbrot
On a lighter note stay in ya lane or I'll have ya mind exposed
Get ur head stomped til red shits on the curb for Orc parkin ur ass in this fire zone

vs.

nik? ok. tic? ok, at least they're swingin bruisers
but when he faces Jillian over his head? he may be the biggest loser
an anonymous roast is somethin ur hardly about to kill
didn't wanna get sonned in reg eh? ur damian marley without the skill
end it fag, u EDIT in horrendous ways n it ain't nice
lines revisited after the viewing, don't expect the same at ur gravesite
cat's actin like he can't rap without burning wessons
ooooook crash bandicoot, that mask only lasts about 30 seconds

Good match up here...
From Inf I liked human botfly and skull stretched the best
Crocheted was worded nicely but Un did a play wit Crocheted I think so that missed to me
Infinite came off kinda stale. The rest was solid... Mandelbrot was some wild shit
revisited after the viewing to me was dope from barc. Crash mask was on point too.
The leg a C & infancy plays I wasn't really feelin but pretty consistent
Overall close to me but the heavy hits from Barc were a little bit heavier

V/ Barcotic