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Old 05-11-2013, 09:45 AM   #11
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@Orc thx for feeding Mr J as well as my own verse.

btw topical battle me in the BA, or sign into the league..That is if u think u can hang w/ these new cats.. however many lines/ whatever topic u want, loose deadline

also hmu with ur homie thrice's old verses if the net hasn't swallowed em up, interested in reading his stuff

enjoyed this verse. First of all strong title to post content ratio, people underestimate how integral to the verse a title can be if u use them right. it can easily cut ur verse in half and have the same impact.

this piece and your writing in general has a cool emotional appeal.. U use ur shortbar-refined wording really well, minimal syllables and smooth multis translates well to topicals. gonna edit this later w/ more in depth feed, still drunk from last night and im spacing out
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