Week 3: Frank vs. Timeless (FRANK WINS 6-0)

Artifice · 03-21-2016, 07:43 PM

dope showing from both of you...

I honestly prefer timeless style of writing, i find it easier to read, and I really like his use of idioms and wordplay in his writing. That being said, I think Frank's piece did a better job of telling a story and relating to the picture. Cool verses from two talented writers, and had timeless' verse painted a more relatable story to the image, he probably would've got my vote, as it stands though...

v/ Frank

03-21-2016, 07:43 PM	#7
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944949	dope showing from both of you... I honestly prefer timeless style of writing, i find it easier to read, and I really like his use of idioms and wordplay in his writing. That being said, I think Frank's piece did a better job of telling a story and relating to the picture. Cool verses from two talented writers, and had timeless' verse painted a more relatable story to the image, he probably would've got my vote, as it stands though... v/ Frank