The Syndicate ft Genocide !!!!!!

[Harsh]

Hi,..

Both drops were decent one focusing on control of flow and syllabe count and one focuses on verbal control and pizazz-i dont think i need to say which was which. Mike Wrecka, you do not need to add the / to the end of your bars and i think you focused more on that flow than content but was still a very respectable verse. Genocide i see you tent to go towards the longbar form and with that are able to put more imagery into your piece. Take for instance this portion,

One grenade'll take away the focus of your guards, harshWhile this cannon to your head turns your throat to mini shardsNinja stars flying like a meteor shower, its a deadly surpiseDie, while gen and mike dissapear like we never arrived


Like a meteor shower, just beautiful if you really thing about it. Anyways yea i liked this. Bye