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Mr. J · 05-10-2013, 07:27 PM

This was nice, I enjoyed the flow from the beginning
still not a fan of paragraphs..buuuut this was well done
the rhyming was continious, a few hiccups but nothing major
twas quite an amazing piece my dear friend

passing blame and confusion, faking allusions.. but ill still laugh n admit it, that im the palpable cynic. i get a bit of amusement , everytime i walk in and see'm spewin "truth" to their students

that was nice...keep writing man

05-10-2013, 07:27 PM	#6
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was nice, I enjoyed the flow from the beginning still not a fan of paragraphs..buuuut this was well done the rhyming was continious, a few hiccups but nothing major twas quite an amazing piece my dear friend passing blame and confusion, faking allusions.. but ill still laugh n admit it, that im the palpable cynic. i get a bit of amusement , everytime i walk in and see'm spewin "truth" to their students that was nice...keep writing man