The Art Of Confession(Genocide, Natural, and EndSane)

Just Write · 05-10-2013, 05:19 PM

this was a dope collab. i love collabs that run off of each other, they seem to help connect the piece as a whole to me,

natural,
i found your verse to have a little humor to it, a few parts made me lop. flow was smooth and consistent and stayed right on topic through out. sex without a condom was funny to me

fav lines

My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in orbit
I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil Sources

I worship satin and abuse anti Psychotics
I steal just about anything i can fit in my Pocket

genocide the priest,

you played this role very well, i could imagine some old tore up dirty priest smokin a cigar and scratchin his nuts while he was talking in the first verse lol, second verse seems like you took a more serious approach. flow and scheme along with word choice was dope as usual.

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First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest
I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police

I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes
you thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave

Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself
Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell
And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows
Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control

endsane,

really enjoyed the flow of your verse, was almost tongue twister-ish, just flowed perfectly imo. content was on point and stayed on topic as well.

fav lines,

See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother
When the trouble muddled I become the imposter
struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber
Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster

this was a very good collab. kinda jealous i wasnt apart of it. you all held it down proper. peace

05-10-2013, 05:19 PM	#5
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	this was a dope collab. i love collabs that run off of each other, they seem to help connect the piece as a whole to me, natural, i found your verse to have a little humor to it, a few parts made me lop. flow was smooth and consistent and stayed right on topic through out. sex without a condom was funny to me fav lines My mind is morbid and a screw loose out in orbit I practice voodoo and summon forces of evil Sources I worship satin and abuse anti Psychotics I steal just about anything i can fit in my Pocket genocide the priest, you played this role very well, i could imagine some old tore up dirty priest smokin a cigar and scratchin his nuts while he was talking in the first verse lol, second verse seems like you took a more serious approach. flow and scheme along with word choice was dope as usual. fav lines First of all son, listen, i ain't ya typical priest I've been through the same shit, and had to visit police I mean -I'm terribly older, and know the different escapes you thinking you can find forgiveness for they dig you a grave Used to share the same images though, I medicated myself Prayed to god, and I was taught my own hatred was hell And as I drank from the well, where all the alcohol flows Face first, passed out from a thirst I never knew how to control endsane, really enjoyed the flow of your verse, was almost tongue twister-ish, just flowed perfectly imo. content was on point and stayed on topic as well. fav lines, See I've doubled the slaughter it was subtle no bother When the trouble muddled I become the imposter struggled with lager, I drank til I was in a puddle of slobber Always finding trouble cause I was a stumbling monster this was a very good collab. kinda jealous i wasnt apart of it. you all held it down proper. peace __________________