I kinda felt the opening was stronger than the finish in truth and maybe wished you had made it longer and fleshed it out to develop the characters background more but all in all, good job.
definitely /exactly/ what I'm trying to work on. connecting pieces, developing, etc. hopefully I stick with this shit this time. appreciate the feed from someone I knew from before.
03-14-2016, 12:42 PM
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