Week 2: Timeless vs. Asylum (TIMELESS WINS SHUTOUT 7-0)

Just Write · 03-14-2016, 12:32 PM

Sigh.... I was hoping someone would take the obvious route and talk about getting high

Timeless, this was very well written man but I don't think you were anywhere near the topic besides the obvious last line, but besides that nitpick I believe you utterly crushed the verse, I couldn't really see anything I didn't like about this besides not really being connected to the topic. Good work man

Asylum... buddy, pal
I wanted to love this so bad but some of the things you write totally throw me, I mean like over my head shit, at first I though you were talking about getting stoned as in biblical days of getting rocks thrown at you, and then you started talking about Stonehenge and what not, I just really couldn't get into this man :'(

Mvgt=timeless for a more completed piece and an enjoyable read overall

03-14-2016, 12:32 PM	#1
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Sigh.... I was hoping someone would take the obvious route and talk about getting high Timeless, this was very well written man but I don't think you were anywhere near the topic besides the obvious last line, but besides that nitpick I believe you utterly crushed the verse, I couldn't really see anything I didn't like about this besides not really being connected to the topic. Good work man Asylum... buddy, pal I wanted to love this so bad but some of the things you write totally throw me, I mean like over my head shit, at first I though you were talking about getting stoned as in biblical days of getting rocks thrown at you, and then you started talking about Stonehenge and what not, I just really couldn't get into this man :'( Mvgt=timeless for a more completed piece and an enjoyable read overall __________________