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Old 03-04-2016, 01:23 PM   #1
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It all trickles geometrical
Little Ellis dose cause a ripple in your pitiful jello bulb
Mental poke. The high is woah, kailodoscope sanction
I am so thankful, to be alive is the main goal
Try n'keep them veins full. Yeah it's brief, don't over think
It's painfully deep and I need it to peak.
Every molecule on acid is easy to see.
I've seen trees breathe like a plastic sponge
Ain't heard rap in months, already know it's all nerds, faggots & chumps
Been drinking from a bird bath,
***tus. Dung. Monkey sea, monkey due, time to eat the shroom
Genius bloom. Ever reached the moon? Splinter self
Liquid gellllllllllllll, excellently exquisite; melt
Winter belches it's mixture's strain
It's pure flame. Just trust.
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Mister cutting loose under the Willow
Using roots as a pillow, duck duck goose with a chisel
A dump truck's usually where limbs go
Let me break it down for y'all brutally simple
Humans been consuming little shroomies to make the moon blink
Forever. Accept it. Eat them, deal with your shit
That there is oneness, and it's as real as it gets
Wanna hold weight in the universe? Such happiness
You're in tears, but they turn into a hundred magic blimps
They're banned because they incinerate every bit of hate
That's been crammed in your face
Haha dabs got me wasted, a damn zombie
Face lit on fire. Tye Dye Mayan archetype light this with wires
Mountain hatch fountain splash, drown in caps
I like the sound of that. But I'm an asshole
I'll knock down your kid's sand castle and hand them potent acid
Fractal pterodactal using color beams to lasso
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Old 03-04-2016, 01:38 PM   #2
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whewwww, went off in this shit. dope mechanics as usual. glad to see you drop suntin fresh wisey. we making a comeback.

Ill catch up to your sister in heely's and Scissor Achilles
this shit killed me.
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Old 03-04-2016, 02:00 PM   #3
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Nice to see you back brah, hope alls been well on your side of the state
I always enjoy your use of verbiage due to your knack of twisting it into a crazy concept

***tus. Dung. Monkey sea, monkey due, time to eat the shroom
Genius bloom. Ever reached the moon? Splinter self
Liquid gellllllllllllll, excellently exquisite; melt
Winter belches it's mixture's strain

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I cant put my finger on it but that is so smoooooth it reminds me of something
the way you wrap it up is well done as well, the fractal pterodactyl shit is nice
a lot of memorable lines here due to the outlandish appeal...nice to see you back
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Old 03-05-2016, 07:02 AM   #4
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I enjoyed this, particularly the technical side of it was done very well. I also appreciate the rather unconventional flow. You incorporated some quite clever and interesting lines, such as in your opening bars. The moon, duck and lasso lines were also entertaining. Good work.
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Old 03-11-2016, 12:19 AM   #6
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I enjoyed this, particularly the technical side of it was done very well. I also appreciate the rather unconventional flow. You incorporated some quite clever and interesting lines, such as in your opening bars. The moon, duck and lasso lines were also entertaining. Good work.
I ENJOYED THIS.

*sips champagne with pinky up*

YES INDEED THE TECHNICAL RHYMINGS WERE JUST EXEMPLAR INDEED. MOST CHOICE. DO I DETECT A HINT OF POE IN MY READING? YES I THINK I DO. INCORPORATABLE.





If there were more open mics like this populating the first page the site would be better for it. Read it and wanted to do drugs to get to know it better.
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I ENJOYED THIS.

*sips champagne with pinky up*

YES INDEED THE TECHNICAL RHYMINGS WERE JUST EXEMPLAR INDEED. MOST CHOICE. DO I DETECT A HINT OF POE IN MY READING? YES I THINK I DO. INCORPORATABLE.





If there were more open mics like this populating the first page the site would be better for it. Read it and wanted to do drugs to get to know it better.
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