03-04-2016, 01:23 PM | #1 |
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Shitty Titt
It all trickles geometrical
Little Ellis dose cause a ripple in your pitiful jello bulb Mental poke. The high is woah, kailodoscope sanction I am so thankful, to be alive is the main goal Try n'keep them veins full. Yeah it's brief, don't over think It's painfully deep and I need it to peak. Every molecule on acid is easy to see. I've seen trees breathe like a plastic sponge Ain't heard rap in months, already know it's all nerds, faggots & chumps Been drinking from a bird bath, ***tus. Dung. Monkey sea, monkey due, time to eat the shroom Genius bloom. Ever reached the moon? Splinter self Liquid gellllllllllllll, excellently exquisite; melt Winter belches it's mixture's strain It's pure flame. Just trust. Thriftworks - Fader. Ill catch up to your sister in heely's and Scissor Achilles Delivering oblivion, caterpillar'd in a blizzard of feelsies Mister cutting loose under the Willow Using roots as a pillow, duck duck goose with a chisel A dump truck's usually where limbs go Let me break it down for y'all brutally simple Humans been consuming little shroomies to make the moon blink Forever. Accept it. Eat them, deal with your shit That there is oneness, and it's as real as it gets Wanna hold weight in the universe? Such happiness You're in tears, but they turn into a hundred magic blimps They're banned because they incinerate every bit of hate That's been crammed in your face Haha dabs got me wasted, a damn zombie Face lit on fire. Tye Dye Mayan archetype light this with wires Mountain hatch fountain splash, drown in caps I like the sound of that. But I'm an asshole I'll knock down your kid's sand castle and hand them potent acid Fractal pterodactal using color beams to lasso
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03-04-2016, 01:38 PM | #2 |
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whewwww, went off in this shit. dope mechanics as usual. glad to see you drop suntin fresh wisey. we making a comeback.
Ill catch up to your sister in heely's and Scissor Achilles this shit killed me.
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03-04-2016, 02:00 PM | #3 |
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Nice to see you back brah, hope alls been well on your side of the state
I always enjoy your use of verbiage due to your knack of twisting it into a crazy concept ***tus. Dung. Monkey sea, monkey due, time to eat the shroom Genius bloom. Ever reached the moon? Splinter self Liquid gellllllllllllll, excellently exquisite; melt Winter belches it's mixture's strain ^^^ I cant put my finger on it but that is so smoooooth it reminds me of something the way you wrap it up is well done as well, the fractal pterodactyl shit is nice a lot of memorable lines here due to the outlandish appeal...nice to see you back
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03-05-2016, 08:28 PM | #5 |
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I enjoyed this, particularly the technical side of it was done very well. I also appreciate the rather unconventional flow. You incorporated some quite clever and interesting lines, such as in your opening bars. The moon, duck and lasso lines were also entertaining. Good work.
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