Week 1: MMLP vs. Just Write (JUST WRITE WINS 6-3)

asylum · 03-07-2016, 10:48 PM

Mmlp – well that was touching bro, great piece. I really enjoyed how this is obviously some real like shit. It vibed well, flow was top notch. Rhymes effortless. Classic mmlp. You took the opportunity this week to do what you wanted, and you did it well. Thanks. Congratulations on your new squeeze mate!
Just Write - woooooow bro this was fucking deep. You should submit this piece to be published. I really really like it. I particularly enjoyed how you rhymed Molotov gods with volatile thoughts. That was so sick. Didn’t really understand “help calvin find peace” but I’m not going to get everything. Torturous existence, all these morgue’s that I visit. Man. Really started this season off with some great rhymes. Great assonance. Very solid writing.

Mgvt just write because he dropped a fucking bombshell. Mmlp wrote something fun and nice to read, and it was enjoyable. But it didn’t appeal to me as much as Just Write. For that, I’m giving him the nod this week.

03-07-2016, 10:48 PM	#12
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Mmlp – well that was touching bro, great piece. I really enjoyed how this is obviously some real like shit. It vibed well, flow was top notch. Rhymes effortless. Classic mmlp. You took the opportunity this week to do what you wanted, and you did it well. Thanks. Congratulations on your new squeeze mate! Just Write - woooooow bro this was fucking deep. You should submit this piece to be published. I really really like it. I particularly enjoyed how you rhymed Molotov gods with volatile thoughts. That was so sick. Didn’t really understand “help calvin find peace” but I’m not going to get everything. Torturous existence, all these morgue’s that I visit. Man. Really started this season off with some great rhymes. Great assonance. Very solid writing. Mgvt just write because he dropped a fucking bombshell. Mmlp wrote something fun and nice to read, and it was enjoyable. But it didn’t appeal to me as much as Just Write. For that, I’m giving him the nod this week.