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Old 03-07-2016, 10:40 PM   #9
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2k – first two lines were really strong bro, best ive seen from you ever. You really did not rhyme to well between second to die and lesson to life.. so that’s going to hurt you. Dude you’ve really come a long way bro. I’m proud of you. I love these last four,
Always went head first and my duty was to pleasure
Sitting around ignorant like why ain't my legs work
So I'm observing the pain when it's down to the pressure
Put all these things together and my pattern explains the weather
It was a little off but it was just dope new and improved 2k. I’m about it man. Keep this shit up, lets get you in the playoffs this season bro.

GC- man it’s nice to read some fresh work from you! Favorite lines..
Despite these uncivil things, his name was etched in history,
You know the thing we use to calculate our brethren’s misery.
Yet, his sweet song decalcified our pineal,
So we’re no longer ostracized for being real.
That was dope as fuck man. I really like the tone of your piece here, rhymes were excellent. I’m not really sure what you’re talking about because my heads all fucked up and this weekend was nuts but I’m going to pick through this later.

Mvgt Godcomplex.. If I was voting on most improved, 2k’d get that. IMHO GC outrhymed his opponent. That's really what made my decision.
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