Week 1: Mr. J vs. Adonis (MR. J WINS 5-4)

MMLP · 03-07-2016, 04:31 AM

THE GRUDGE MATCH IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LOL.. LETS GO!

Adonis- on third read LOL, I think I’ve gathered it, your talking about a writer in a relationship, who turned to the bottle and ultimately has messed up his career n relationship?? few multies in there ;)
not bad, ive seen better story telling from you tbf!

Mr J- first line is sick! Had to type that before I continued reading.. will only get worse from here surely haha! I was wrong, this verse is crazy, described brilliantly throughout, great twist! I think this some of your best work. second best verse of the week ;)

v/ J

haha just seen Adonis getting all the votes... wtf!

03-07-2016, 04:31 AM	#8
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	THE GRUDGE MATCH IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LOL.. LETS GO! Adonis- on third read LOL, I think I’ve gathered it, your talking about a writer in a relationship, who turned to the bottle and ultimately has messed up his career n relationship?? few multies in there ;) not bad, ive seen better story telling from you tbf! Mr J- first line is sick! Had to type that before I continued reading.. will only get worse from here surely haha! I was wrong, this verse is crazy, described brilliantly throughout, great twist! I think this some of your best work. second best verse of the week ;) v/ J haha just seen Adonis getting all the votes... wtf!