Week 1: 2Tripple0 vs. Godcomplex (2TRIPPLE0 WINS 4-2)

Mr. J · 03-06-2016, 12:30 AM

PP, I feel like this may be the first time you really brought a decent verse to the table
this was put together with your normal shtick but you seemed more focused this time around
the rhymes actually came off smooth and I feel like you brought a more appealing side out
I feel like short verse may be your calling and if there was ever a league for it you would make it to the semis...
no joking. saying that I feel like you need to find your balance on lines to keep and lines to lose.
this is more of a practice round for you and you shine like twinkle...

Godcomplex, upon reading your verse you bring the standard use of religion.
I love religion concepts I tried to do a lot before I stopped caring about what people wanted to see.
as I continued reading I feel like you really grasp onto the topic and round out your own ideals
your train of thought is unlike any others & your crown is deserved as the leagues champ
some lines could have been chopped out though you tip toed your way over the limit with this one...

v/ I am unsure of how I should judge this one @asylum, this is a very troublesome decision
my heart says I should give it to Godcomplex but my mind knows that there is more to this...
I will need verification before I move on with this vote...well...you already know my vote

after reading these again I am now leaning towards 2K @2tripple0 nice work buddy....keep elevating

03-06-2016, 12:30 AM	#6
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	PP, I feel like this may be the first time you really brought a decent verse to the table this was put together with your normal shtick but you seemed more focused this time around the rhymes actually came off smooth and I feel like you brought a more appealing side out I feel like short verse may be your calling and if there was ever a league for it you would make it to the semis... no joking. saying that I feel like you need to find your balance on lines to keep and lines to lose. this is more of a practice round for you and you shine like twinkle... Godcomplex, upon reading your verse you bring the standard use of religion. I love religion concepts I tried to do a lot before I stopped caring about what people wanted to see. as I continued reading I feel like you really grasp onto the topic and round out your own ideals your train of thought is unlike any others & your crown is deserved as the leagues champ some lines could have been chopped out though you tip toed your way over the limit with this one... v/ I am unsure of how I should judge this one @asylum, this is a very troublesome decision my heart says I should give it to Godcomplex but my mind knows that there is more to this... I will need verification before I move on with this vote...well...you already know my vote after reading these again I am now leaning towards 2K @2tripple0 nice work buddy....keep elevating __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 03-07-2016 at 10:35 PM.