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03-05-2016, 05:32 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 863
Battle Record: 23-19
Accomplishments - OM HOF
Champed - Fight Night 2
- Write Week V
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- Winter Topical II
- 1-2 Punch league
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Just Write - technique was good, but there wasn't much flair. I'd say that for the content as well. It was good, but you didn't really push any boundaries. It was safe.
MMLP was more my kinda tone. It was fun, the lines were brief and the rhyming was crisp. When I found out what your content was, I thought it was the perfect route to take. Very good idea and executed nicely. Vote -- MMLP
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