Week 1: Mr. J vs. Adonis (MR. J WINS 5-4)

Adonis · 03-05-2016, 02:48 PM

~A tale of two – My Darling Darlene~

I gave you my heart and you split it in two
Painting with chalk, a souls outline entombed
At first, our relationship, unicorns and rainbows
You'd show love, posting notes unique with new angles
Consistent like clock work, but everything changed
You became vocally awkward, subsequently trolling away
You had my vote of confidence with a quite demeanor
But minor success raised a complex cocky believer
A youth with bright future fizzled down to an ember
And your consistency switched to not returning to sender
You became ghost like, well, aside from yapping a lip
A dog with no bite juvenilely crafting a crypt
Losing respect, jilted by the writing of text
A once jovial character consumed with light hearted jest
My Darling, you're a son of a gun shooting out blanks
Sipping Pinot instead of trying to run through the ranks

Your's Truly

03-05-2016, 02:48 PM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	~A tale of two – My Darling Darlene~ I gave you my heart and you split it in two Painting with chalk, a souls outline entombed At first, our relationship, unicorns and rainbows You'd show love, posting notes unique with new angles Consistent like clock work, but everything changed You became vocally awkward, subsequently trolling away You had my vote of confidence with a quite demeanor But minor success raised a complex cocky believer A youth with bright future fizzled down to an ember And your consistency switched to not returning to sender You became ghost like, well, aside from yapping a lip A dog with no bite juvenilely crafting a crypt Losing respect, jilted by the writing of text A once jovial character consumed with light hearted jest My Darling, you're a son of a gun shooting out blanks Sipping Pinot instead of trying to run through the ranks Your's Truly __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 03-05-2016 at 04:43 PM.