The Root

Mr. J · 03-03-2016, 05:32 PM

I thought this was written quite well, the previous piece you took interest in was also a cypher piece.
Rarely do I find the time to sit & think properly the sporadic rhyming I feel...forms nicely.
I see that you are a fan of Jean Grae which may have influenced the style you brought together
the flow was smooth throughout and I really enjoyed the swift read as I was finishing up
its a refreshing vibe seeing your love for the genre, nice work here..keep writing

03-03-2016, 05:32 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I thought this was written quite well, the previous piece you took interest in was also a cypher piece. Rarely do I find the time to sit & think properly the sporadic rhyming I feel...forms nicely. I see that you are a fan of Jean Grae which may have influenced the style you brought together the flow was smooth throughout and I really enjoyed the swift read as I was finishing up its a refreshing vibe seeing your love for the genre, nice work here..keep writing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you