AOWL Spotlight Match #1: Frank (6-2) VS. dead man (2-2) [DEAD MAN WINS, 5-3.]

Zen · 05-09-2013, 01:20 PM

Great battle.
dead: Very poetic vibe to this. Loved it to be honest especially the prophets will die section. That shit was very well written. No parts of this seemed to lag it kept going at a constant pace throughout and for that props. Nice piece and welcome back to the league man.
Frank: An epic verse here this week. Great story told here and pretty amazing you kept up with the same scheme throughout however many lines your piece was. Very nice. This piece seemed to start slow and pick up steam about halfway through and never let up and came to a pretty decisive close. Very impressed with this piece Frank.

All in all I gotta go against the consensus and vote for Frank. Great battle though guys.

05-09-2013, 01:20 PM	#11
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Great battle. dead: Very poetic vibe to this. Loved it to be honest especially the prophets will die section. That shit was very well written. No parts of this seemed to lag it kept going at a constant pace throughout and for that props. Nice piece and welcome back to the league man. Frank: An epic verse here this week. Great story told here and pretty amazing you kept up with the same scheme throughout however many lines your piece was. Very nice. This piece seemed to start slow and pick up steam about halfway through and never let up and came to a pretty decisive close. Very impressed with this piece Frank. All in all I gotta go against the consensus and vote for Frank. Great battle though guys.