AOWL Spotlight Match #1: Frank (6-2) VS. dead man (2-2) [DEAD MAN WINS, 5-3.]

NYCSPITZ · 05-09-2013, 01:45 AM

dope battle. It was close but got black here, usual dope flow and laconic impact which fit the piece and ended with a bang. Lots of quotables. Frank with the nice story that I enjoyed. I particularly liked the descriptive aspects of the trip, seems like u packed a lot of art in there, plus I liked the attention to detail in Frank's i.e. curfew @ 6 in a South American country. Cool underlying themes like death/afterlife. Your verse gained momentum and my interest the more I read and if u kept that pace up at the beginning it's anybody's game but Black got it this time imo

05-09-2013, 01:45 AM	#9
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	dope battle. It was close but got black here, usual dope flow and laconic impact which fit the piece and ended with a bang. Lots of quotables. Frank with the nice story that I enjoyed. I particularly liked the descriptive aspects of the trip, seems like u packed a lot of art in there, plus I liked the attention to detail in Frank's i.e. curfew @ 6 in a South American country. Cool underlying themes like death/afterlife. Your verse gained momentum and my interest the more I read and if u kept that pace up at the beginning it's anybody's game but Black got it this time imo