Vulgar vs Objective - OPEN FOR KOALAS

[Tre The ABC Darian]

My worst companion

Translucent relations allow moments to pass,
I'm waist deep in the grass for these omens are vast.
A structured psyche of brick buildings that crumble but last,
my face is set in stone for those tempted to ask.
I take heed in my craft and conscious but daft I bleed in this raft,
when I seeked comfort in words of wisdom Lucifer laughed.

With broken pride you stood up for what I believed in,
made purpose to grieving for the person that sees him.
The previous couplet is third perspective curses of freedom,
let's break the fourth wall to see what the author gets hurt and then flees from:

I know what I am and cuz of that I write words in rapid succession,
it's fun when you turn a mindstate to a product of depression.
And that's what this poem is - the dark underworld in search of a closure,
I keep my entities close, but my enemies closer.




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maximum cadets
entering pier
please have your ID pulses on hand
(Prepare to insert for genetic verification)

Do have a disposition for earth science
and the small luxuries: a hard day's work
best friend bracelets or a bowl of hot soup
Beyond this checkpoint of barren glitz
and iron lane markers
You'll find a planet which means more
than a school project -
that was once the original point of reference
for humanoids, rhombus boys and star hooligans

dragoon ship cargo transferred
(even if you've got mandibles from an army additive
you still deserve a debt free education)
Logging in the following cadets:
ventriloquist: mike009
vacillating: Billy paradigm
torqued: Tavaris tailbridge
soldered: Henry houser
burdened: Finnegan speakathon
who - all up to their eyes in vaccines
will become acquainted with a set of spemaximum cadets
entering pier
please have your ID pulses on hand
(Prepare to insert for genetic verification)

Do have a disposition for earth science
and the small luxuries: a hard day's work
best friend bracelets or a bowl of hot soup
Beyond this checkpoint of barren glitz
and iron lane markers
You'll find a planet which means more
than a school project -
that was once the original point of reference
for humanoids, rhombus boys and star hooligans

dragoon ship cargo transferred
(even if you've got mandibles from an army additive
you still deserve a debt free education)
Logging in the following cadets:
ventriloquist: mike009
vacillating: Billy paradigm
torqued: Tavaris tailbridge
soldered: Henry houser
burdened: Finnegan speakathon
who - all up to their eyes in vaccines
will become acquainted with a set of species
like mosquitos, black mambas & bad screenplays

A field trip to planet Earth
(never has a return trip been so ironic
or, arguably, draconian) cies

A field trip to planet Earth
(never has a return trip been so ironic
or, arguably, draconian)


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vulgur started out with a great idea but it fell flat ... with a lack of scriptural flow ... and a lack of wordplay

and those Obj had flow ...a couple of lines were forced ... and the imagry was lack luster


vote ... vul