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02-03-2016, 01:28 PM
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Cool story. Technically Act II and Act III would be the same Act since you don't really change scenes or anything.
tempting the balling fool off his mortal cord I don't get this line. Last act is troublesome. You could clarify the story here since it's the most important part.
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