SEASON II: Weekly Chat - Page 4

Objective · 01-22-2016, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frank

Had a blast writing that piece. Loved your analogy.

What's my strongest piece?

I can tell you had a lot of fun with it which also turned to be your Achilles heel. The Storyline is okay but the characters didn't seem to have any real motives for doing what they did, being too invested with ideas and concepts can turn into a bad omen if you forget about the other details in the process as well.

Personally this might be your favorite piece of mine, and one of the reasons I look forward to reading your battles/pieces: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=6035 In this one you gave the characters life, development and motives while keeping a consistent storyline with rich imagery and wordplay.
Conceptually this might be my fav of yours: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=4249 You did the repetitive style really well which is hard as fuck to pull off along with sparking some emotions and critical thoughts of my own when I read it. Never ended up voting on it though, don't know why I didn't but I remember reading the battle.

Frank · 01-23-2016, 04:54 AM

Having difficulty recalling anything you have ever written? Lol. If you were to put as much thought into your votes as you did your verses, you would be more reputable . So while I loved your perception and interpretation and analogy, What have you honestly written that is remotely memorable?

Not taking anything away from your dope ass break down, because it was a fucking trip. Fucking Loved it. Major, major props. Those kids actually refused to say anything positive about my piece, which ultimately lead me to believe there was a collective jealousy of underlying hatred against me. At least somebody responded intelligently

Yo Your feedback made writing that story worthwhile bro.

2tripple0 · 01-23-2016, 12:03 PM

I thought some of it was on point I just started posting online again and it's been difficult getting connections so that I can post again and I'm still working it out and both that verse which is my first in the poetry league and the verse I dropped in the winter topical tourney were rushed and written under extreme circumstances I will try to drop more often but again it depends on how much time I can spend on netcess and how much notice I can comment however with ought thinking that I deserved those two losses ultimately and depending how much it depends on how much it depends on winning battles in the future

@Vulgar

Objective · 01-24-2016, 02:01 AM

Dope that you enjoyed it @Frank. I don't know if I got any memorable pieces at all. I've only written one piece I was somewhat satisfied with. I hate to say that I forgot to save the only memorable piece I've written and it got lost during the ISTL, the picture given was a fish in a light bulb or something and I had a concept of how it was a metaphor for humanity and the state we're in. Beside of that I don't think I've written anything I'm actually satisfied with myself.

2tripple0 · 01-24-2016, 03:48 PM

What's going on I thought verses were due on Friday all these no shows and no votes on graph and my battle lol wtfgo?

slech · 01-29-2016, 12:05 AM

I would like feed

slech · 01-31-2016, 07:49 PM

lets vote and close this week
@Vulgar @grafx @Objective

Objective · 02-02-2016, 01:41 PM

I'm going vote and/or feed your piece @slecht if it gets closed. Been quite busy lately so I haven't had the time yet. I apologize to everyone for not doing my part but I will make sure to do it in one way or the other.

Inno · 02-06-2016, 04:59 PM

I'm here guys sorry for the absence had a ruff couple of weeks
@Vulgar @Objective

Continue?

Vulgar · 02-06-2016, 06:39 PM

def

2tripple0 · 02-07-2016, 12:35 PM

I'm ready when does next week start

Objective · 02-08-2016, 08:03 AM

Been some weird couple weeks for me too. Fucking intense rollercoaster of a life yo. Hope things are going okay with you @Innovator. Give me a couple more days and I might be back on track as well.

Inno · 02-08-2016, 10:17 AM

@Objective no doubt we can pick this up on Friday or this coming Monday

Rough first month for the year lol

slech · 02-08-2016, 04:35 PM

open my battle for kangaroos or some shiet

2tripple0 · 02-14-2016, 09:06 AM

This shit needs to start itself back up

2tripple0 · 02-16-2016, 09:50 AM

Lol what happened to my battle this week?

Inno · 02-16-2016, 09:55 AM

@2tripple0

I got u in a few

2tripple0 · 02-16-2016, 09:57 AM

Werd up thought I got left behind like

Vulgar · 02-19-2016, 12:02 AM

@Innovator

Let's celebrate your 5,000th post properly, champ.

@Witty, bring on the brews!

Inno · 02-19-2016, 12:16 AM

Lmao I'm actually drinking now. Cheers

01-23-2016, 04:54 AM	#62
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Having difficulty recalling anything you have ever written? Lol. If you were to put as much thought into your votes as you did your verses, you would be more reputable . So while I loved your perception and interpretation and analogy, What have you honestly written that is remotely memorable? Not taking anything away from your dope ass break down, because it was a fucking trip. Fucking Loved it. Major, major props. Those kids actually refused to say anything positive about my piece, which ultimately lead me to believe there was a collective jealousy of underlying hatred against me. At least somebody responded intelligently Yo Your feedback made writing that story worthwhile bro. __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 01-23-2016 at 05:07 AM.

01-23-2016, 12:03 PM	#63
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	I thought some of it was on point I just started posting online again and it's been difficult getting connections so that I can post again and I'm still working it out and both that verse which is my first in the poetry league and the verse I dropped in the winter topical tourney were rushed and written under extreme circumstances I will try to drop more often but again it depends on how much time I can spend on netcess and how much notice I can comment however with ought thinking that I deserved those two losses ultimately and depending how much it depends on how much it depends on winning battles in the future @Vulgar __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

01-24-2016, 02:01 AM	#64
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Dope that you enjoyed it @Frank. I don't know if I got any memorable pieces at all. I've only written one piece I was somewhat satisfied with. I hate to say that I forgot to save the only memorable piece I've written and it got lost during the ISTL, the picture given was a fish in a light bulb or something and I had a concept of how it was a metaphor for humanity and the state we're in. Beside of that I don't think I've written anything I'm actually satisfied with myself. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

01-24-2016, 03:48 PM	#65
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	What's going on I thought verses were due on Friday all these no shows and no votes on graph and my battle lol wtfgo? __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-02-2016, 01:41 PM	#68
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	I'm going vote and/or feed your piece @slecht if it gets closed. Been quite busy lately so I haven't had the time yet. I apologize to everyone for not doing my part but I will make sure to do it in one way or the other. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

01-29-2016, 12:05 AM	#66
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	I would like feed

01-31-2016, 07:49 PM	#67
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	lets vote and close this week @Vulgar @grafx @Objective

02-06-2016, 04:59 PM	#69
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	I'm here guys sorry for the absence had a ruff couple of weeks @Vulgar @Objective Continue?

02-06-2016, 06:39 PM	#70
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	def

02-07-2016, 12:35 PM	#71
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	I'm ready when does next week start __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-08-2016, 08:03 AM	#72
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Been some weird couple weeks for me too. Fucking intense rollercoaster of a life yo. Hope things are going okay with you @Innovator. Give me a couple more days and I might be back on track as well. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

02-08-2016, 10:17 AM	#73
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	@Objective no doubt we can pick this up on Friday or this coming Monday Rough first month for the year lol

02-08-2016, 04:35 PM	#74
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	open my battle for kangaroos or some shiet

02-14-2016, 09:06 AM	#75
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	This shit needs to start itself back up __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-16-2016, 09:50 AM	#76
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Lol what happened to my battle this week? __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-16-2016, 09:55 AM	#77
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	@2tripple0 I got u in a few

02-16-2016, 09:57 AM	#78
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Werd up thought I got left behind like __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-19-2016, 12:02 AM	#79
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	@Innovator Let's celebrate your 5,000th post properly, champ. @Witty, bring on the brews!

02-19-2016, 12:16 AM	#80
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Lmao I'm actually drinking now. Cheers