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Personally this might be your favorite piece of mine, and one of the reasons I look forward to reading your battles/pieces: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=6035 In this one you gave the characters life, development and motives while keeping a consistent storyline with rich imagery and wordplay. Conceptually this might be my fav of yours: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=4249 You did the repetitive style really well which is hard as fuck to pull off along with sparking some emotions and critical thoughts of my own when I read it. Never ended up voting on it though, don't know why I didn't but I remember reading the battle.
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01-23-2016, 04:54 AM | #62 |
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Having difficulty recalling anything you have ever written? Lol. If you were to put as much thought into your votes as you did your verses, you would be more reputable . So while I loved your perception and interpretation and analogy, What have you honestly written that is remotely memorable?
Not taking anything away from your dope ass break down, because it was a fucking trip. Fucking Loved it. Major, major props. Those kids actually refused to say anything positive about my piece, which ultimately lead me to believe there was a collective jealousy of underlying hatred against me. At least somebody responded intelligently Yo Your feedback made writing that story worthwhile bro.
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01-23-2016, 12:03 PM | #63 |
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I thought some of it was on point I just started posting online again and it's been difficult getting connections so that I can post again and I'm still working it out and both that verse which is my first in the poetry league and the verse I dropped in the winter topical tourney were rushed and written under extreme circumstances I will try to drop more often but again it depends on how much time I can spend on netcess and how much notice I can comment however with ought thinking that I deserved those two losses ultimately and depending how much it depends on how much it depends on winning battles in the future
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01-24-2016, 02:01 AM | #64 |
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Dope that you enjoyed it @Frank. I don't know if I got any memorable pieces at all. I've only written one piece I was somewhat satisfied with. I hate to say that I forgot to save the only memorable piece I've written and it got lost during the ISTL, the picture given was a fish in a light bulb or something and I had a concept of how it was a metaphor for humanity and the state we're in. Beside of that I don't think I've written anything I'm actually satisfied with myself.
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01-24-2016, 03:48 PM | #65 |
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What's going on I thought verses were due on Friday all these no shows and no votes on graph and my battle lol wtfgo?
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01-29-2016, 12:05 AM | #66 |
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I would like feed
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02-02-2016, 01:41 PM | #68 |
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I'm going vote and/or feed your piece @slecht if it gets closed. Been quite busy lately so I haven't had the time yet. I apologize to everyone for not doing my part but I will make sure to do it in one way or the other.
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02-06-2016, 06:39 PM | #70 |
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02-07-2016, 12:35 PM | #71 |
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I'm ready when does next week start
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Been some weird couple weeks for me too. Fucking intense rollercoaster of a life yo. Hope things are going okay with you @Innovator. Give me a couple more days and I might be back on track as well.
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open my battle for kangaroos or some shiet
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02-14-2016, 09:06 AM | #75 |
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This shit needs to start itself back up
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02-16-2016, 09:50 AM | #76 |
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Lol what happened to my battle this week?
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02-16-2016, 09:57 AM | #78 |
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Werd up thought I got left behind like
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Lmao I'm actually drinking now. Cheers
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