Argh vs. Mr. J - OPEN FOR VOTES

Cimmerian · 01-22-2016, 09:59 AM

I felt that this was the Battle of the Week.

Argh:

You weaved a very descriptive verse regarding a gambling addict.

Highlights:

"the crumpled paper joined the others piled against the wall."

"despite all she had, nothing compared to the dream."

Mr. Jefferson:

You expounded on a man who lost it all.

Highlights:

"My heel cracks the puddle that nightfall has frozen to ice"

"I climb under the tarp & made myself a bed out of everything I have"

It appeared to me that Argh conceded the battle. But I did want to comment that I felt these two verses, in my opinion, were in the Top 3 this week (The third being @Pent uP 's.)

Nice work, both of you.

Cimm.

01-22-2016, 09:59 AM	#14
Cimmerian Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 142 Rep Power: 2933499	I felt that this was the Battle of the Week. Argh: You weaved a very descriptive verse regarding a gambling addict. Highlights: "the crumpled paper joined the others piled against the wall." "despite all she had, nothing compared to the dream." Mr. Jefferson: You expounded on a man who lost it all. Highlights: "My heel cracks the puddle that nightfall has frozen to ice" "I climb under the tarp & made myself a bed out of everything I have" It appeared to me that Argh conceded the battle. But I did want to comment that I felt these two verses, in my opinion, were in the Top 3 this week (The third being @Pent uP 's.) Nice work, both of you. Cimm.