Argh vs. Mr. J - OPEN FOR VOTES

UnbornBuddha · 01-21-2016, 10:37 AM

B.E., sorry its hard for me to call you Argh. Anyhow, I thought the verse itself was okay. It was very direct, and though very current to the events of the world it was too direct. Not a bad verse, but not your best work. Seemed more like a fun open mic than a piece I expect from you at a high-level topical tournament. As always a nice, clean structure but the content itself was underwhelming.

Mr. J- This was nice. It was very humorous, even as you depicted destitute and the ruin of this person, capital wise. It was a spin from rags to riches, more like riches to rags. And another good thing is that it never became too melancholy, there was a sense of lightheartedness present. LOL at Frank's statements, hahaha.

Sorry. B.E. but I have to go for

Vote: MR. J

01-21-2016, 10:37 AM	#9
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	B.E., sorry its hard for me to call you Argh. Anyhow, I thought the verse itself was okay. It was very direct, and though very current to the events of the world it was too direct. Not a bad verse, but not your best work. Seemed more like a fun open mic than a piece I expect from you at a high-level topical tournament. As always a nice, clean structure but the content itself was underwhelming. Mr. J- This was nice. It was very humorous, even as you depicted destitute and the ruin of this person, capital wise. It was a spin from rags to riches, more like riches to rags. And another good thing is that it never became too melancholy, there was a sense of lightheartedness present. LOL at Frank's statements, hahaha. Sorry. B.E. but I have to go for Vote: MR. J