2tripple0 vs slecht OPEN FOR VOTES

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Triple

overall man - I'm not sure what direction you where taking here with summer breeze.- from my understanding and quote me if I'm wrong, but the layout seemed to jump around quite a bit. This is fine at times, but the connection seemed vague. Meaning you went from fishing to a girl leaving him struggling because of a mixtape, then how you have to find your way, then how people constantly paying to live. That is my understanding. Anyways I like your writing style, but I don't think this piece was suited well for the topic - other than that keep writing.

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slecht

nice little short pattern here. abab rhyme schemes flow well so nothing wrong with doing it. overall it was short and sweet. Discussing how you took a trip, met a girl shortly after which ended in a romantic affair. When the sun comes up you leave to only do it again. - that's my understanding anyway.

v/slecht - i enjoyed it just a bit more topic wise and the rhyme scheme didn't hurt but i didn't base it off that because poetry doesn't have to rhyme. Plus triple had a decent rhyme to his also in a different style which was also enjoyable as a free flow.