Round One: MMLP vs. Pent UP [OPEN FOR VOTES]

[Soulstice]

MMLp - flow was real sick, the second stanza had sick imagery, but the first, i was really confused aside from a few lines. I think you could've cut this down by 12 lines or so. the ending was pretty funny. you know it had a personality, i didn't really connect to the story emotionally though. the imagery was fresh but i didn't care about the character once i realized she was a chicken.

pent - woah this was fresh. the message was very clear and each line constructed a new idea or developed an existing one in a different way, although the ending was so obvious it was unneccessary. i guess this is a credit to your clarity in this verse but i think you couldve went without it. the flow was the best this round. do you ever get rusty?

v/ pent - connected to it more and the mechanics were fresh. the pieces progression was top notch too