Round One: Mr. J vs. Bags [OPEN FOR VOTES]

Diode · 01-12-2016, 11:06 AM

Bags:

while humorous and a wanton disregard for the purpose of a topical tournament, bags willingly took the L to make a point. at least he mentioned the umbrella?

MJ:

this was solid. great use of color in reference to the subject at hand. not much of a story being told, more a statement / stream of consciousness piece. it does what it needed to do. didn't like the ending, though i get its purpose.

v/ MJ

01-12-2016, 11:06 AM	#6
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,165 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899410	Bags: while humorous and a wanton disregard for the purpose of a topical tournament, bags willingly took the L to make a point. at least he mentioned the umbrella? MJ: this was solid. great use of color in reference to the subject at hand. not much of a story being told, more a statement / stream of consciousness piece. it does what it needed to do. didn't like the ending, though i get its purpose. v/ MJ __________________