Plot Vs Pinot Grij - PINOT WINS

Schadenfreude · 01-10-2016, 02:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Opener, Quiet can, box office

Although your concepts were original, they weren't quite harsh enough.

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Originally Posted by Plot

Opener, Story

Same problem yo opponent has, great concept mediocre wording & execution.

Decent battle, both had some pretty good ideas, but both dropped the dagger at the moment to kill. PINOT GRIJ edges, because he just needs to be harsher, while Plot has more awkward wording issues.

Denton · 01-10-2016, 06:15 PM

You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar
I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire

You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you
When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too
Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers
My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over

bay line is great

vs

You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined,
Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion.

And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic,
.If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic.

except the last is a bit wordy but concept is good

PG was just more consistent, his bay line was nice.

vote-pg

01-10-2016, 06:15 PM	#2
Denton Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	You talk guns but won’t do shit when I come with the pump, liar I’m Michael Bay, you’ll see this Plot get lost in all of the gunfire You ain’t a real man – that’s an Avatar. I swear I hate bitches like you When my Force Awakens it’ll smash your box office, plus the one you live inside too Even if you got eleven homeys, it’s like New Year’s when I body your soldiers My noisemaker blows, then it strikes twelve and your whole party is over bay line is great vs You better find a religion man, up against Plot you'll get totally ruined, Put the biscuit in ya mouth and bang, be one with god, like the holy communion. And this pathetic cunts still a virgin? its sad how this dudes lifes so tragic, .If you ever saw Pin sticking it n a doll, he was just up to some voodoo magic. except the last is a bit wordy but concept is good PG was just more consistent, his bay line was nice. vote-pg