Patrick vs. Vinny {Patrick wins}

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Originally Posted by Vinny™

Patrick ima Swerve just to sprey this newbie
only time he hear.. PS I Love You, is his sister favorite movie
Delivery was off but the concept was original - Spend more time on wording
faggit stop beatin off let your arm rest, your battlin a calm vet
the only time P-A problem, is in City Wide Bomb Threats
I get where your going with this, but poor wording again, there is no delivery or sting in these
known for hollows & techs! play ur cards right or youl fall on the deck!
cuz' if we get nervous when you Post Up, its just the Jason Collins affect
Liked the concept in here, but you seem to really lack wording and execution. Think you need to take a browse over some of the training sessions that are up and it could help you by miles
im always applauding myself for getting even cause i hate odd
cant escape god! so il put Pat on His Back, w/ out him doing a great job
this is a nice peice of wordplay, still think wording was off to some degree, but by far your best so far
Pat? for this young bastard il just grab the old revolver
only hip hop talk, if they mention Trick Daddy, cuz he dont know his fatherThis was a poor close

Originally Posted by Patrick

You’re serious?

You’re not improving, no matter how much you bitch and you shout,
Vin’s still weeks away from being relevant…and that’s only cause Fast 6’ll come out.
Nice opener
It’s not a game when you come at me, I’ll make this fool cry out,
And have this bitch run up for kicks and get injured like the first female NFL tryout.
Lol okay
Your girls a slut, facts is facts dookie, there’s no way to defend it,
That bitch got an open ended pink slip that Bags can only hope to contend with.
Really nice liked this - nice bags reference
Vinnie is a fitting name now, but your last one was just lame shit,
Cause you can’t be named Kwality and not have a single bar that displays it.
lol got some good chuckles from me on that one
Me and your girl switching positions, got the dick scoopin guts,
When she tired of the back, bitch get it from the front, man like groupie sluts.This one was missed on me

Easy vote - Pat

Vinny you need to take more time on planning out your bars, your concepts are quite good and fresh but the wording and execution is awful..Also I felt no sting other then one bar in your entire verse.