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Old 11-10-2015, 02:15 PM   #1
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I drew a frown on your blank stare and your mouth began to resemble a smile.
I choke you 'cause you hate air. You came for a while.
You hate the way I hurt you. Why do you stay?
I love seeing you cry. Is it really rape?
We bought duct tape at Wal-Mart. You giggled as we paid.
I love the way you swallow every drop, but hate the way I taste.
My anger boiled over and spilled on your new dress.
I only hit you 'cause you let me. Nod your head 'yes'.
I work just to own you. You're lazy by choice.
I confuse you with dialog. You fall into my void.
I dress you like a slut and never show my jealousy.
I'm a role you want filled. You're a well I pour this hell in me.
Your bruises are showing. Family thinks I'm abusing you,
but your scars are older than us. I know you're used to cruel.
Stupid little dummy. I'm indebted to you for what you lack.
My shitty piece of shit. My perfect human punching bag.
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Old 11-13-2015, 06:28 AM   #2
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Old 11-13-2015, 09:44 AM   #3
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Sounds like you and @Bags have the same girlfriend

Do you have cancer by any chance?
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Old 11-13-2015, 10:06 AM   #4
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Old 11-13-2015, 11:04 PM   #5
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Old 11-19-2015, 06:30 PM   #6
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Old 11-21-2015, 06:47 AM   #7
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A lot of cockholes before me...pay no attention to them as they love dick sumthin' chronic.

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You hate the way I hurt you. Why do you stay?
I love seeing you cry. Is it really rape?
We bought duct tape at Wal-Mart. You giggled as we paid.
I love the way you swallow every drop, but hate the way I taste
Dope.

Liked this...'tis solid.

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Old 12-05-2015, 05:55 PM   #8
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this is pretty damn good from a technical standpoint
negro please
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Old 12-05-2015, 11:29 PM   #9
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