11-17-2015, 08:40 PM | #1 |
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Semi Finals - Junto vs. Knux - JUNTO WINS
The Fall Brawl Line Limits - 14 Min / No Max If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop. All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada) Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one. DUE DATE IS 11/24/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST Need anything, let me know. @Junto @Knux
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11-28-2015, 03:52 AM | #2 |
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin' ...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase No one marvels at your features PLEASE, they think this guys a Marvel creature But they wasn't wit u shootin in the gym... so their balls ain't the size of marbles either oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King? You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs. yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back I got plaques from allll my killings lately - you ain't got enough to speak bout yea u topped Wave, like a Crest... but 1 brush wit me gon knock ur fuckin teeth out GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled? He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces faggot |
11-28-2015, 10:12 AM | #3 | |
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He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10 Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out
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11-28-2015, 04:55 PM | #4 |
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Used a lot of new flips to old concepts, so that cost u IMO, otherwise dope verse.
Your misses weren't bad, just didn't hit as heavy as the quotables, all in all a sick drop. Overall KNUX edged, he just landed harder, haymaker-esque..lol, punches. Propers to but for impressive tourney runs. |
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6-6 on lines that i can fuck with, i think junto was a tad more consistant, but knux got the heat quotes 2-1.. junto started off good then trailed off, knux was the opposite.. shit, could really go both ways .. coinflip, uhhh i'll go with knux cuz he ended stronger n was slightly more memorable.. v knux Last edited by Resin M-I-C; 11-28-2015 at 05:06 PM. |
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11-28-2015, 10:37 PM | #6 |
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King? You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs. yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled? He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle vs You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when.. He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10 No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack this was a dope battle, a couple lines couldve been worded better to me but alot of hits here, liked the back to the drawing board line was a spin on a concept that had been done differently and I think the Anon threat and SPF 50 was my fav lines of this battle tbh. v/KNUX
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase --- good..... No one marvels at your features PLEASE, they think this guys a Marvel creature But they wasn't wit u shootin in the gym... so their balls ain't the size of marbles either --- lol aite....... oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King? You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs. --- nice current event flip........ yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back --- nice quote personal, haven't seen price on ur head flipped like that. Good shit....... I got plaques from allll my killings lately - you ain't got enough to speak bout yea u topped Wave, like a Crest... but 1 brush wit me gon knock ur fuckin teeth out --- fire.......... GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled? He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle --- lol aite......... Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces --- wasn't really feelin this. See what u going for it didn't translate imo...only miss tho........ Vs. You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when.. He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10 --- seen a similar concept to this on rb where broke does star ratings. Diff but the same in principle....still cool tho, just took a little heat off it for me.......... Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right --- two things I don't like about this bar. 1. Its one of those 2004 style hesitation misdirects. Stop it. 2. Seen too many Holm's lines lately. Its too obvious. Youda had to really flip it dope to get it quoted from me........... No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator --- why 5c? Just feels random lol. Other than that I like the flip on room to breathe........... Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner --- nice.......... Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year --- played concept, cool flip.......... Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack --- fire......... Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out --- ehhh..."I'll make ur drums pop" just doesn't do anything for me. Lines aite tho....... Overall: Both dudes had really good verses and made this an enjoyable read. I got junto taking it tho. Knux verse felt too repetitive with almost every line being a flip on a saying or phrase. This is close tho but I thought junto had the better overall verse. Dope battle. V. Junto |
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Jun had a nice verse, 6 out the pound was tough and he had a couple other nice shit too. Only one miss. Knux had a consistently solid verse, some older stuff like the Rousey lines and pale in comparison tho. Anon threat was lotb tho. I just think junto made me react more. If Knux had another solid line over a miss, or another nice line or another banger he'd prob get it from me since he also had lotb As it is tho Jun was too consistent Good shit. V/ jun
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11-29-2015, 08:56 PM | #9 |
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Opener, price on head, crest, closer
Vs Opener, holm, spf50, isis, V/Jun. He had stronger quotes. Knux had a lot of jabs. It really came to isis vs Juntos closer. They both canceled each other out but comparing the other quotes i think Junto took this.
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase I thought this opener by junto was the best part out of both verses. Clever and I really like the rhyme aspect of it. Steroid reference and rhyming in the next couplet was cool too. I thought the 2nd half/ending of his verse did not nearly match the quality of the beginning parts. So taking the verses on the whole, I see Knux as more consistently delivering good punches with good structure/rhyming. Thanksgiving dinner, SPF50, to name a few. Those two hit as far as the rhyming/flow and I liked the wordplay in the Thanksgiving part...the SPF50 lil' corny but I like the setup&rhyme. So this is tough because of Junto's fire opener, but based on the overall verse MVGT Knux |
12-02-2015, 04:33 AM | #12 |
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase Dope shit No one marvels at your features PLEASE, they think this guys a Marvel creature But they wasn't wit u shootin in the gym... so their balls ain't the size of marbles either lol oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King? You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs. Nice line yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back --seen similar before but it was worded cool I got plaques from allll my killings lately - you ain't got enough to speak bout yea u topped Wave, like a Crest... but 1 brush wit me gon knock ur fuckin teeth out --didn’t like this word association stuff GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled? He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle Missed for me tbh Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces Dope as fuck to close You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when.. He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10 --okish line nothing special Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right --even though ive seen ‘em done, this was cool No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator Seen similar used tbh Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner --cool shit Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year --looooooool wording made it hilarious Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack This is fucking dope, LOTB easily Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out --nah this felt largely outta place with your rest knux had lotb but junto more consistent mvgt - junto
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JUNTO WINS PROPS TO BOTH SOPE BATTLE
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