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Old 11-28-2015, 10:12 AM   #1
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But all haters expose themselves eventually, thanks Broke!

you fuckin cowardly scum. Take this L whenever you're ready pussy
You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when..
He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10
Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight
Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right
No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater
You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator
Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger
Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner
Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer
Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year
Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked
You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack
Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown
Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out
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Old 11-28-2015, 04:55 PM   #2
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Opener, Colorado Springs, free head & teeth out
Used a lot of new flips to old concepts, so that cost u IMO, otherwise dope verse.

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Opener, room 5C, thnxgiving dinner & sunscreen
Your misses weren't bad, just didn't hit as heavy as the quotables, all in all a sick drop.

Overall KNUX edged, he just landed harder, haymaker-esque..lol, punches. Propers to but for impressive tourney runs.
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Old 11-28-2015, 05:01 PM   #3
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Look, we can have a clash of clans...

& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase
--wording was solid, ok punch
No one marvels at your features PLEASE, they think this guys a Marvel creature
But they wasn't wit u shootin in the gym... so their balls ain't the size of marbles either
--haha ether
oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King?
You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs.
--seen it coming but straight
yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap
it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back
--seen similar price on ur head / bj flips.. didnt hit for me
I got plaques from allll my killings lately - you ain't got enough to speak bout
yea u topped Wave, like a Crest... but 1 brush wit me gon knock ur fuckin teeth out
--not feelin
GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled?
He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle
--corny bro lol
Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this
Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces
--wasnt really feeling
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You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when..
He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10
-- i usually dont keep up with discussion punches, but this was aight
Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight
Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right
-- cmon bro how many of these have been dropped already lol
No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater
You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator
-- ehhhh
Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger
Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner
-- there we go, that hit
Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer
Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year
-- this concept is old as shit, solid wording tho
Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked
You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack
-- that's a heater
Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown
Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out
-- coo closer, coulda been a crazy gun bar

6-6 on lines that i can fuck with, i think junto was a tad more consistant, but knux got the heat quotes 2-1.. junto started off good then trailed off, knux was the opposite.. shit, could really go both ways .. coinflip, uhhh i'll go with knux cuz he ended stronger n was slightly more memorable..

v knux

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Old 11-29-2015, 08:39 PM   #4
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Look, we can have a clash of clans...

& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase
--haha cool
No one marvels at your features PLEASE, they think this guys a Marvel creature
But they wasn't wit u shootin in the gym... so their balls ain't the size of marbles either
--ok
oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King?
You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs.
--ok





yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap
it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back
--nice personal flip
I got plaques from allll my killings lately - you ain't got enough to speak bout
yea u topped Wave, like a Crest... but 1 brush wit me gon knock ur fuckin teeth out
--idk how I feel about this one. The wording is good obviously but the concept seemed like a reach. Like this was the best u could have worded it and it still just didn't feel right
GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled?
He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle
--haha
Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this
Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces
--damn
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You shoulda lost that to des.. I dont get why son pouts, when..
He acts like he goes for Broke.. but all his verses lookin like 1/10
--ok
Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight
Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right
--ok. The added holm/home connection makes this ok. Seen plenty of Rousey lines
No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater
You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator
--eh, ok.
Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger
Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner
--nice flip
Skill wise we on diferent levels.. its effortless slayin this queer
Ur talent level dusnt just pale in comparison, it rocks SPF 50 everyday of the year
--I seen this a lot. Good wording, just not different enough for me to give it credit.
Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked
You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack
--heat
Whole site had enougha u.. we'll all be happy when I drop this clown
Everything u do falls on deaf ears so i'll make sure ur drums pop when I knock you out
--deaf ears/drums pop was a weird connection but it works I guess. Ok line.
Good battle bros. I held off voting for awhile because y'all both my dudes but this needs votes so I gotta do it. You know I'll keep it real tho

Jun had a nice verse, 6 out the pound was tough and he had a couple other nice shit too. Only one miss.

Knux had a consistently solid verse, some older stuff like the Rousey lines and pale in comparison tho. Anon threat was lotb tho.

I just think junto made me react more. If Knux had another solid line over a miss, or another nice line or another banger he'd prob get it from me since he also had lotb

As it is tho Jun was too consistent

Good shit.

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Old 11-30-2015, 10:09 AM   #5
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Look, we can have a clash of clans...

& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase
oh you the greatest in text? well how good are you at dodgin hollows King?
You tryna put on a clinic. I'm more like dude at the one in Colorado Springs.





yoooo STOP that. You sound like a fuckin fanboy that shit is NOT rap
it's hard to put a price on ya head tho, When u ben givin it for free ever since u got back
GOMD you lame that's no riddle. After I leave this gayboy belittled?
He'll go back to the drawing board... & prolly make a ♡ & ↗ wit our names in the middle
Got this .357... you act familiar, you shoulda known I ben bout this
Fuck how much weight you lift. You can take 6 out the 'pound like 10 ounces

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Shit aint been the same since I left.. but I returned n I know this mans tight
Cuz now that I'm back it'll feel like Holm..caught u w/ that headkick & overhand right
No question ya hospital bound.. watch as the hands dead this hater
You'll be beggin for room to breathe till I land you in 5C ona respirator
Theres a huge gap between us.. i'll air'em out wita shank or the trigger
Keep trying to cover the spread and i'll leave u face down in ur thxgiving dinner
Toe to toe ur fucked.. stand up w/ me & u might get cracked
You're such Anon Threat you could reveal locations for the next Isis attack
This was a good battle. I think Jun had a couple harder hits here, though. Otherwise it was pretty even in terms of quotes. The price on your head was ooookkk, but either way I think Jun had the harder hits. Though Anon threat was dope & prob LOTB.

Junto edges this.
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& you'll get gift wrapped when big gats burstin, I'll tell ur wifey 'get ya thick ass twerkin'
...then shoot that angry bird too. You can charge it to the game like an in-app purchase

I thought this opener by junto was the best part out of both verses. Clever and I really like the rhyme aspect of it.
Steroid reference and rhyming in the next couplet was cool too.

I thought the 2nd half/ending of his verse did not nearly match the quality of the beginning parts.

So taking the verses on the whole, I see Knux as more consistently delivering good punches with good structure/rhyming.
Thanksgiving dinner, SPF50, to name a few. Those two hit as far as the rhyming/flow and I liked the wordplay in the Thanksgiving part...the SPF50 lil' corny but I like the setup&rhyme.


So this is tough because of Junto's fire opener, but based on the overall verse MVGT Knux
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