Semi Finals - ill nik-A vs. Tic - ILL NIK-A WINS

sral · 11-27-2015, 07:55 AM

You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible
If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you
Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells
Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves

two nice hits back to back

I thought the Madden Release idea was cool, but hated the "Madden Release anger", the anger part felt like it should have been connected too, but wasn't. It just read a little weird to me like that with the whole thing not working.

Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well
1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele

dope concept

I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo
I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo

LOL creative but wasnt feeling this one as much as some of your other lines

Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such...
We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup

this one is super played in UK hiphop, maybe not so much outside but yeah... considering i used to battle in Liverpool every 2-3 weeks, i've heard far too many of these to give it props. Sorry bruh!

Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains
Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane

cool current event and tied in well, maybe just lacked a little sting to really hit hard

nice shit!

ill nik-a:

u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit
u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages
a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more
don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store

YO, THIS LINE IS DOPE AS FUCK AHAHAHHAA! I'm guessing you guys stateside have the same things we do here with like, a cardboard cutout or a full sized sticker stuck in the windows of those stores of the security guy? LOLOLOLOL never seen this done before. thats hilarious!

on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk
ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt

cool.

cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch
the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit

lol i liked this one too, maybe the reception/signal ish been done but the aluminium foil was a new addition

I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick
My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music

lmao this shits funny, nice line. something kung-fu esque about it

Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream
Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme

damn that shits dope as fuck too

Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me
With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees

not feeling this one, maybe missed something?

nik had some dope fucking lines this round. two real bangers and a lot of solid shit. tic had a few highlights with the Adele and 38 Snub lines i liked, couple other references that were cool i thought, but Nik smashed this

those two lines in particular, the ponzi scheme and dollar store sticker security guard shits are fucking ILL, like seriously dope and i've never seen them done in all my years texting

nik zipped him up

11-27-2015, 07:55 AM	#10
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	You consider yourself a legend, but we think that fact’s reprehensible If you were so busy Crackin Skulls, explain why not even a Fracture remembers you Plus you’re almost 40 & STILL complain, now you’ll crumble w/ Shells Fuck Carrying. You’re a 38 Snub that’d make pro gunmen turn one on themselves two nice hits back to back I thought the Madden Release idea was cool, but hated the "Madden Release anger", the anger part felt like it should have been connected too, but wasn't. It just read a little weird to me like that with the whole thing not working. Cherish family, cuz when you die ya Spirit will haunt them as well 1 wrong move & I’ll have you saying ‘hello from the other side’ like that song from Adele dope concept I don’t play around, when I spray the pound @ this aging gringo I’ll Pull it, Dump & Fill this whole Square up..that’s a full card game of Bingo LOL creative but wasnt feeling this one as much as some of your other lines Real textheads despise you, b. So I'll Stab ya gut, blood spillin & such... We'll watch ya Liverpool. The resounding cheers would rival that team winning the Cup this one is super played in UK hiphop, maybe not so much outside but yeah... considering i used to battle in Liverpool every 2-3 weeks, i've heard far too many of these to give it props. Sorry bruh! Plus ya overweight as FUCK. Ya wife knows it & tmr you'll have stomach pains Cuz all your advances cuttin into Turkey will get shot down like that Russian plane cool current event and tied in well, maybe just lacked a little sting to really hit hard nice shit! ill nik-a: u can lie till u’re blue but PM’ing me ya lines is adolescent shit u not a crip, tic… just a wack fag who hides behind the wording in private messages a worthless piece of shit that cannot protect his honor more don’t look at us to bounce ideas off… ur creativity’s a security guard at the dollar store YO, THIS LINE IS DOPE AS FUCK AHAHAHHAA! I'm guessing you guys stateside have the same things we do here with like, a cardboard cutout or a full sized sticker stuck in the windows of those stores of the security guy? LOLOLOLOL never seen this done before. thats hilarious! on ur own u’d be nothing cuz honestly u just an amateur punk ya best pieces get torn apart & buried… u’d swear voters were playin scavenger hunt cool. cant u see u’re not that good? obviously RB had u spoiled, bitch the little reception u gotten here’s on some rabbit ears with aluminum foil shit lol i liked this one too, maybe the reception/signal ish been done but the aluminium foil was a new addition I dare u to shoot nik cuz I’ll send goons to erase ur dudes quick My crew ‘travel-In packs’… urs wear Jansport, avoid fights & have bad taste in music lmao this shits funny, nice line. something kung-fu esque about it Fuck ya team! Robbing Resin got u invested to falsely dream Air u out for bankin off everyone’s money lines… verses were runnin a Ponzy scheme damn that shits dope as fuck too Hurt ya confidence bad; simply by provin u cannot test me With mind games that’ll leave this pea brain in a podcast seen all across Netcees not feeling this one, maybe missed something? nik had some dope fucking lines this round. two real bangers and a lot of solid shit. tic had a few highlights with the Adele and 38 Snub lines i liked, couple other references that were cool i thought, but Nik smashed this those two lines in particular, the ponzi scheme and dollar store sticker security guard shits are fucking ILL, like seriously dope and i've never seen them done in all my years texting nik zipped him up __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)