BAL: 2tripple0 (1-1) vs. Plot (1-1) - PLOT WINS

[Junto]

Think you'll survive in a battle with Plot? Dude you ain't got the criteria,
Imma just start melting this flake, I'm Bear Grylls stuck in Siberia.
this is solid, cool concept
This lame's just inferior, his styles shitty! It's a chump vs. a savage,
Watch NC spin-out as Plot drops 2 trip like hippies double dumping acid.
Ida left the 'double' out but that's me... this was decent too
Cuz all ya text attacks are rancid, son when NC reads 'em the bros cringe,
Way he always whiffs so bad, gotta keep him at arms length with nose pinched.
ehhh nah too simple
And the girl you macks a tramp, gotta a tatt of the neighbourhood on her back,
Known as 'Dug Out' coz she keeps a side of dudes waiting with wood, up to bat.
coulda worded this better not a big fan of that 'up to bat' finish
...So, smash this fag with a plank till he's crippled and gurgles, injured and purple,
Left trying to get splinter out of his head, like when Raphael left the ninja-turtles.
good idea... coulda been worded better again

vs.

Yo you a faggot when it comes to the rap game
Think u a playa but ya favorite position on the court is getting butt raped
haha... how you mean? not much to the concept but it was kinda funny
And ya styles redundant and ya lines unimportant
You like the cop in scarface looking for a first class ticket so start packing for london
bad rhyme choice wit 'unimportant'. what cop in scarface? didn't get a connection
But I wasn't about to stimulate votes until I saw plot was getting summarized
So like a concubine plot got nothing to take control so he fetting colonized
ehhhh like a concubine... idk my man these not makin a whole lotta sense
Like the Americans and the Indians but this restaurant doesn't need this nerds reservations
Since plots name says it all everything's up to interptetations
this is actually a nice concept you just needa word it a lot differently
Seriously I'm dead at this fool thinking he cant catch one
I'm like a dopiate for real but if ur butthurt u can pay ya sister for a backrub
haha what now?

both need some work... 2crip wasn't throwin too many comprehensible ideas out
Plot had a few good ones to be honest. Polish up on execution & you on your way.
hit my inbox if you want some more advice on it

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