wk16: 11-4 Godcomplex vs. 4-4 Asylum -ASYLUM WINS)

timeless · 11-13-2015, 05:45 AM

Asylum, not really into sci-fi anything tbh unless it's mystery science theater 3000 lol. Not a bad read tho, lots of dope detail and good rhyne schemes made for a solid easy read. Only thing I can really make note of was how incomplete it felt but that's just prolly me.

GC, too many mistakes in here make it hard for me to enjoy. Your concept was dope and had way more potential than what you displayed here. Not much else to say really. Not one of your best pieces to date.

V. Asylum

11-13-2015, 05:45 AM	#7
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	Asylum, not really into sci-fi anything tbh unless it's mystery science theater 3000 lol. Not a bad read tho, lots of dope detail and good rhyne schemes made for a solid easy read. Only thing I can really make note of was how incomplete it felt but that's just prolly me. GC, too many mistakes in here make it hard for me to enjoy. Your concept was dope and had way more potential than what you displayed here. Not much else to say really. Not one of your best pieces to date. V. Asylum