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05-06-2013, 01:08 AM
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Ayo creed. You portrayed what you set out to dude. The piece had emotion to it and you got that down on a basic level. However in my opinion you should work on your lyricism. There are many ways to convey those thoughts homie. Become familiar with multi syllable rhymes and youll improve on that note alone.
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