Women from Venus, Men from Mars

[Maximus]

WHAT THE FUCK!!
How come a dope piece like this get slept on. This was really enjoyable by me from the beginning to the last word, shit was captivating, I read it twice man.. That's how much I loved it, solid concept and was well executed with complex inner rhymes, metaphors, wordplays and imagery.. Twas beautifully crafted.. These were some of my fav parts
this gentle notion has grown as true as my best cologne is, but
with more soul abuse than a bowling shoe with it's endless owners
i dried the wettest ocean while crying, hold me. deflect the harm
take the methods motion, dissect emotion and hem the scars.
Liked the wordplay here...
Also
eat some greek, it's something quick. stick pita in some hummus dip
the metaphor just said explores the region where i stuck my dick
i pleaded him to fuck me harder. seeping, then a gush of it
erupted my circumference like the screams, deep in my stomachs pit
she loved it! yeah. she needs it. now i'm feeling so above her shit
she's a fucking succubus
the heat between us smothered like we're creases in an oven mitt
Damn son, dope imagery
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One luv bro