Week 15: (4-1) MMLP vs. (3-7) Timeless - MMLP 5-3

Razah · 11-06-2015, 08:28 PM

Uh, not a big fan of timeless' verse this time around.

I can't really explain it, I just didn't "feel" it. The verse was cool, but like I said, nothing really stuck to me. From previous verses of yours I can remember, this is probably the weakest one I've read from you. I usually like the shit you write, not that this was written bad, it just didn't have that little 'umph'

MMLP, I liked how you went with short lines. It kept shit moving along well, flowed pretty smooth, the take on the topic was on point, good verse. One thing I disliked, which, can't nothing really be done about, was how bad skulls / roars didn't rhyme for me... buuttt, I bet that's an accent thing. Anyways, good stuff.

This battle kind of surprised me. Figured timeless would take this based on previous verses, but MMLP dropped a better verse.

vMMLP

11-06-2015, 08:28 PM	#16
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Uh, not a big fan of timeless' verse this time around. I can't really explain it, I just didn't "feel" it. The verse was cool, but like I said, nothing really stuck to me. From previous verses of yours I can remember, this is probably the weakest one I've read from you. I usually like the shit you write, not that this was written bad, it just didn't have that little 'umph' MMLP, I liked how you went with short lines. It kept shit moving along well, flowed pretty smooth, the take on the topic was on point, good verse. One thing I disliked, which, can't nothing really be done about, was how bad skulls / roars didn't rhyme for me... buuttt, I bet that's an accent thing. Anyways, good stuff. This battle kind of surprised me. Figured timeless would take this based on previous verses, but MMLP dropped a better verse. vMMLP