Week 15: (4-1) MMLP vs. (3-7) Timeless - MMLP 5-3

The Law · 11-06-2015, 01:42 AM

Timeless - Really nice verse and I liked your approach on this. Good wording and a smooth readability from start to finish. There were a few quotables I had regarding the imagery and wording in some of the lines. Loved the whole closing section, especially that last bar to close the verse off. Overall I thought it was a unique and original take on the topic and you stayed with it well. It had great progression and left myself as a reader satisfied.

MMLP - Another decent take on this topic. I liked the predator take. What really shined out in your verse for me was the rhythm and flow. It was very nicely written for that aspect, the lines were short, sweet and compact and read great. On the flip side, some of it was a bit simplistic when it came to the wording, thought there could have been a bit more detail and/or some quotable lines thrown through the verse.

MVGT: Timeless - Going to be a battle that comes out real close at the end of it. I can see how this can go either way for anyone that reads it. Both had very creative approaches and great writing in their verses. I just really enjoyed Timeless's approach on this topic and some of his imagery pushed it a bit more over the top for me. Great job guys. Nice battle to read.

11-06-2015, 01:42 AM	#14
The Law Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 86 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 238319	Timeless - Really nice verse and I liked your approach on this. Good wording and a smooth readability from start to finish. There were a few quotables I had regarding the imagery and wording in some of the lines. Loved the whole closing section, especially that last bar to close the verse off. Overall I thought it was a unique and original take on the topic and you stayed with it well. It had great progression and left myself as a reader satisfied. MMLP - Another decent take on this topic. I liked the predator take. What really shined out in your verse for me was the rhythm and flow. It was very nicely written for that aspect, the lines were short, sweet and compact and read great. On the flip side, some of it was a bit simplistic when it came to the wording, thought there could have been a bit more detail and/or some quotable lines thrown through the verse. MVGT: Timeless - Going to be a battle that comes out real close at the end of it. I can see how this can go either way for anyone that reads it. Both had very creative approaches and great writing in their verses. I just really enjoyed Timeless's approach on this topic and some of his imagery pushed it a bit more over the top for me. Great job guys. Nice battle to read. __________________