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Old 10-31-2015, 11:20 AM   #1
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AOWL Season V, Week 15


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Tuesday at 9 P.M. Pacific/West Coast or Tuesday 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM Wednesday Central European/London
There are NO extensions.


Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Friday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Friday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Saturday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

All competitors must vote on THREE battles

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Topic:The one who loves least controls the relationship


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Old 10-31-2015, 12:13 PM   #2
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Incorrect record aside, I'm here :D

I'm gonna write about how Nigma doesn't reciprocate my love and always gets my name wrong so he controls how we move forward in this relationship :(
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Old 11-03-2015, 07:43 PM   #4
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I just awoke from a three day self induced coma in my sensory deprivation chamber and am now prepared to write. I'm going to have to avoid reading your verse due to the inevitable emotional repercussions. Good luck @EvP, I'm gonna put on my Freddie Kruger gloves and fistfuck your dickhole tho. No homo
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Women from Venus, Men from Mars


i hold a severed heart and a quest that's broken.
it's time again. behold this, i'll lend my presence and pledge devotion
this gentle notion has grown as true as my best cologne is, but
with more soul abuse than a bowling shoe with it's endless owners

i dried the wettest ocean while crying, hold me. deflect the harm
take the methods motion, dissect emotion and hem the scars.

fill the empty deadness with pills, injections. i never starve
got me feeling reckless, my wielded senses are set on target

he gets me. hardly. her attempts to blend with me kinda pathetic..
i kinda regret this. partly cause the sex is hardly the best
we party with friends that i'd argue to bet are larger
never captained that action. its a ship i never harbored
despite the endless hardships, remaining faithful and loving him

thinking back to the days, relapsing my brain to us younger kids
snuggled, munching popcorn, i was melting as the butter drips
meaning and it's substance was unleashed with that first hug and kiss
prestigious feelings summoned from the meeting of our touching lips

eat some greek, it's something quick. stick pita in some hummus dip
the metaphor just said explores the region where i stuck my dick

i pleaded him to fuck me harder. seeping, then a gush of it
erupted my circumference like the screams, deep in my stomachs pit

she loved it! yeah. she needs it. now i'm feeling so above her shit
she's a fucking succubus
the heat between us smothered like we're creases in an oven mitt

i'd bluff denying struggle from how deeply I'm in love with him
feel like she's in awe the way she deals with this so comfortably
still really holding on till death, i'm reeling in this lust i live

fealty is fading like a Queen who just can't trust her Prince
i wanna...
fuck his cousin cause he's probly sleepin with some other bitch

don't wanna sleep, dream she's cheating. please, i've had enough of this
deeper than diseases, it's deceit. our beings clung to it
to believe that shes in love with me, i speak to priests. put trust in them

plead with them and see if they can speak to God and summon Him
they say even demons bleed, we can beat it. just don't cuss and quit

she started acting weird, was tested, peed, we seen the plus on strip
people always seeking ways to even up the dumbs they did
our breed has shown achievements, no ones speaking on the trust from kids

we started off as martians, now we're leaning on the mothership
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Old 11-04-2015, 10:58 AM   #6
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Could I get an extension on this till tonight? Got a bit caught up here with the final moving stages. Ironically the only cunt I've had to ask for an extension on this against previously was Nigma. Sorry mate haha.
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Fuck EtH, what are doing with your life. You both need to sign in for playoffs

Sorry Nigma, if no show wins were leather your be assless chaps

Sorry mate, congrats on the title though
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