Timeless vs JESODIST - Jeso 5-1

Nigma · 10-30-2015, 11:46 AM

Another very close battle here. Jeso you continue to impress me with your topical prowess. Your ability to focus on a single topic has improved drastically over the years and the growth is nice to see. Mechanics has waves of uncertainty however it reads smooth for the most part. I preferred the mechanics, angle, and content direction of timeless however he cut himself short with the length he chose. If it were double the length this would have been a tougher choice but with what was posted Jeso had the more enjoyable verse.

10-30-2015, 11:46 AM	#1
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Another very close battle here. Jeso you continue to impress me with your topical prowess. Your ability to focus on a single topic has improved drastically over the years and the growth is nice to see. Mechanics has waves of uncertainty however it reads smooth for the most part. I preferred the mechanics, angle, and content direction of timeless however he cut himself short with the length he chose. If it were double the length this would have been a tougher choice but with what was posted Jeso had the more enjoyable verse. __________________