CHAMPIONSHIP: EtH vs MMLP - ETH 4-0

Nigma · 10-29-2015, 08:11 PM

Two verses different in so many ways but laid out in a somewhat similar manner. Both withholding certain facts to enforce a 'shock' in the finale. MMLP went with a more emotional approach, and EbH went for the twist factor.

Breaking down the vote, although the battle was comparably close, there was a clear winner in my eyes. MMLP came with a strong piece laced with emotion, however his opponent is a seasoned veteran who delivered a well executed twist piece that had was mechanically sound and polished, and that kept the reader guessing until the final line. Really nice play at the topic.

+1 ErP

10-29-2015, 08:11 PM	#6
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Two verses different in so many ways but laid out in a somewhat similar manner. Both withholding certain facts to enforce a 'shock' in the finale. MMLP went with a more emotional approach, and EbH went for the twist factor. Breaking down the vote, although the battle was comparably close, there was a clear winner in my eyes. MMLP came with a strong piece laced with emotion, however his opponent is a seasoned veteran who delivered a well executed twist piece that had was mechanically sound and polished, and that kept the reader guessing until the final line. Really nice play at the topic. +1 ErP __________________