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![]() The Fall Brawl Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop. All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada) Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one. DUE DATE IS 10/28/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST Need anything, let me know. @ill nik-A @Kemizt
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If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee. I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots. Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat. I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course, unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God. but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you. When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse @Meth @ill nik-A
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Nik's verse
Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack ^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence
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Other than Nik's closer . i pretty much felt the rest. like woah type.
Kemizt- opening, method man were nice. Just felt nik took this with 2 or more quotes. v- nik |
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I grudgingly quoted those, tbh. Fresher concepts, too much played material.
Decent verse, kind of lazy, but u def did more damage to your opponent, than he did to u. I had a Fan Duel idea, but now I won't use it..lol. Overall this was an OK battle, Kem u have to work on newer concepts, anyway iLL Nik-a took it. |
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[QUOTE=Kemizt;545106]If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee. relevant set up. not as hard hitting but cool I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots. Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket 1st flip saunders concept I see other than Useless's. I like it. Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat. I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat ehhhh wording killed u. not sure if im feeling it. ok concept he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course, unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force 1st sandinista/nicaraguan concept I see LOL. I can relate to this cause I know about it. so cool. I like I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God. but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad ehhhh, wording hurt u but cool concept This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you. When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse nah Quote:
nik: Lab / Fan Duel / Nation wide Both had some lines/set ups that were on point but others that were not so much and they looked rushed. I thought this was gonna be one sided since Nik is one of the faves to win this but kem gave him a good match up. Both had cool openers. Winner to me was the one who didn't seem so rushed in thinking about the concept, had better wordplay and more hits than misses However, the loser only lost by a small margin. he had good punches but fell down in the middle. At some points i had to re-read a line because it jst didn't flow right. vote / kemist barely
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If he blames it on age for the terrible aim, I'll ground n pound this geek.
nik's never been a stand up guy... fgt has always sat down to pee. seen a similar line a while back so that took away a lot for me here I target all audiences. 1 punch will get caught up right in the feels of you faggots. Even NBA fans got a bit emotional when they saw ill flip to the casket haha idk bout the setup but the punch was good Put me on diss track, and I'll hand nik an L with ease. Take a seat. I'm not a drum circle Hackey sacker...but he will still get kicked around the beat ehhh nah wasn't feelin this reference he'll call cuba for back up but that wont stop me of course, unless he's a sandinista, we wouldn't ever say nik, a raw one with force creative shit but the wording was off to me I'm an Ol' dirty Bastid, a Masta Killa with foreign ladies that treat me like U God. but I seen your method, man and none of it come close to ever wu abroad I like that This bar ends your fall brawl run. That's the end of the story for you. When I say It's my fault you're dead... you can say I'm using a sorry excuse okay vs. Ur name shows ya creativity; u don't need a flask for the facts Kemizt's in the lab... Cuz I have a well trained pure breed who i asked to attack this is tough ^That'll top ya verse but I'll continue to kill u cuz I do it for the sport Beating me's ur fantasy... But I bet ya life This is a fan duel u can't afford nice Nigga this is training day so rookie get ya feet wet & respect Acting like u don't care if u lose but feelin burned inside like u suffered from Acid reflex haha nah its reflux my man. concept was there though I fucked ya girl once so forever beware, cuz yes she cares stole ur weed to smoke with me... got high & thought there was actually 'chemistry' there somethin a lil bit corny bout this one but I still liked it for the creativity U making all these lines for nothing so fuck ur silly pride This isn't fair... the height of ur career wont even get u on the kiddie rides lol cool Everyone knows u have no chance I got the same ole arm equipped for dominance U write ya verses to the Nation Wide is on ur side jingle to give u confidence this was pretty good this was better than I expected... never really seen kemizt before, he a RMBVA dude? Flip & Wu Abroad were both quality from him. After that it was a cpl good attempts But more hit or miss than Nik who came wit some haymakers & stayed consistent Kemizt in the lab & fan duel were heat, Chemistry was fresh, nationwide & height solid Nik-a takes it decisively but not a bad showing from Kem either V/ ill Nik |
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kem had flip and wu abroad with 2 misses nik had kemist in the lab, fan duel, and kiddier rides with one miss good showing from kem but nik got this cool read v/ ill nik-A
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