2triple0 vs Mr. J - MJ 6-0

CopyPat · 10-29-2015, 02:01 AM

lol this wasn't the best battle... ahahah mj doing just enough to win

twotripleohohohohoh: ur verse read like a 15 year old rapping about vampires. u had all the telltale signs. one and 2 syllable rhymes that even then were slanty. EXACT literal direct take on the pic...top notch wordplay like vegan and morgan freeman and very basic scheming and vocab. im quite sure ur verse itself was scarier than the pic. if that was somehow ur intention then this might be a hof verse but reading ur OM and cypher posts i know it was not.

MJ- i literally had this same idea at first for my pic when i could not fuckin think of ANYTHING. i was just gonna write about the horror genre in general though. ur renting of the actual movie was a much better idea. i can tell u didn't put a lot into this haha but it was enough to win as i said earlier. WAY fresher idea on the pic and obviously better mechanically. pretty straight forward win here. you and i both know you'll have to do better than this going forward but i understand the concept of pacing urself lol. hopefully u don't take a miss-step in ur next match though due to getting outta the groove and letting urself take it easy a little.

VOTE : MJ for better everything

10-29-2015, 02:01 AM	#6
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	lol this wasn't the best battle... ahahah mj doing just enough to win twotripleohohohohoh: ur verse read like a 15 year old rapping about vampires. u had all the telltale signs. one and 2 syllable rhymes that even then were slanty. EXACT literal direct take on the pic...top notch wordplay like vegan and morgan freeman and very basic scheming and vocab. im quite sure ur verse itself was scarier than the pic. if that was somehow ur intention then this might be a hof verse but reading ur OM and cypher posts i know it was not. MJ- i literally had this same idea at first for my pic when i could not fuckin think of ANYTHING. i was just gonna write about the horror genre in general though. ur renting of the actual movie was a much better idea. i can tell u didn't put a lot into this haha but it was enough to win as i said earlier. WAY fresher idea on the pic and obviously better mechanically. pretty straight forward win here. you and i both know you'll have to do better than this going forward but i understand the concept of pacing urself lol. hopefully u don't take a miss-step in ur next match though due to getting outta the groove and letting urself take it easy a little. VOTE : MJ for better everything __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.