2triple0 vs Mr. J - MJ 6-0

Mr. J · 10-27-2015, 11:59 PM

Now...You can walk any corner & step into any store..
Every movie that's remade; its all the same as before.
make up what you need, with the mask your reborn..
using every idea, but everyone keeps asking for more!
a disease & a cure, what lies in the heart? eternity..
with whats at stake.. this dull fate seems like an absurdity
how can one be worry free when the modern allure is weak
damn them! I think to myself..I think otherworldly.
my sight lowers & I feel compelled to up & call it quits..
my journey has meant nothing, its built on broken promises
the color drains from my face, frozen by the ominous..
collapsing to one knee, I stared into eyes where darkness crept
my fate was sealed....

I picked myself up & went to the front counter...
paid the 3.99 & rented a classic for the next 72 hours...

CopyPat · 10-29-2015, 02:01 AM

lol this wasn't the best battle... ahahah mj doing just enough to win

twotripleohohohohoh: ur verse read like a 15 year old rapping about vampires. u had all the telltale signs. one and 2 syllable rhymes that even then were slanty. EXACT literal direct take on the pic...top notch wordplay like vegan and morgan freeman and very basic scheming and vocab. im quite sure ur verse itself was scarier than the pic. if that was somehow ur intention then this might be a hof verse but reading ur OM and cypher posts i know it was not.

MJ- i literally had this same idea at first for my pic when i could not fuckin think of ANYTHING. i was just gonna write about the horror genre in general though. ur renting of the actual movie was a much better idea. i can tell u didn't put a lot into this haha but it was enough to win as i said earlier. WAY fresher idea on the pic and obviously better mechanically. pretty straight forward win here. you and i both know you'll have to do better than this going forward but i understand the concept of pacing urself lol. hopefully u don't take a miss-step in ur next match though due to getting outta the groove and letting urself take it easy a little.

VOTE : MJ for better everything

10-27-2015, 11:59 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Now...You can walk any corner & step into any store.. Every movie that's remade; its all the same as before. make up what you need, with the mask your reborn.. using every idea, but everyone keeps asking for more! a disease & a cure, what lies in the heart? eternity.. with whats at stake.. this dull fate seems like an absurdity how can one be worry free when the modern allure is weak damn them! I think to myself..I think otherworldly. my sight lowers & I feel compelled to up & call it quits.. my journey has meant nothing, its built on broken promises the color drains from my face, frozen by the ominous.. collapsing to one knee, I stared into eyes where darkness crept my fate was sealed.... I picked myself up & went to the front counter... paid the 3.99 & rented a classic for the next 72 hours... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-29-2015, 02:01 AM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	lol this wasn't the best battle... ahahah mj doing just enough to win twotripleohohohohoh: ur verse read like a 15 year old rapping about vampires. u had all the telltale signs. one and 2 syllable rhymes that even then were slanty. EXACT literal direct take on the pic...top notch wordplay like vegan and morgan freeman and very basic scheming and vocab. im quite sure ur verse itself was scarier than the pic. if that was somehow ur intention then this might be a hof verse but reading ur OM and cypher posts i know it was not. MJ- i literally had this same idea at first for my pic when i could not fuckin think of ANYTHING. i was just gonna write about the horror genre in general though. ur renting of the actual movie was a much better idea. i can tell u didn't put a lot into this haha but it was enough to win as i said earlier. WAY fresher idea on the pic and obviously better mechanically. pretty straight forward win here. you and i both know you'll have to do better than this going forward but i understand the concept of pacing urself lol. hopefully u don't take a miss-step in ur next match though due to getting outta the groove and letting urself take it easy a little. VOTE : MJ for better everything __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.