Rnd1 - Spoken vs. Lotto Smirk - OPEN FOR VOTES

Junto · 10-18-2015, 07:40 PM

Uve got a way with words that's got voters in a bind for jokes,
Cus the way they were on LSD... got me thinking they were overdosed.
execution was weak but decent concept here
U prolly like what's with all these nameflip... this shit is a dud,
But im just puttin emphasis on a flip like Jose Bautista wit the home run.
okay....

vs.

ain't noticed u poor bastard, act like u live that life but can't afford a car lets get it right
only time the light'll be on spoke is if this poor bastard has to travel anywere at night
lol
I could pick apart ur style so don't act like u dope n u the don too
u struggle with flo n I don't mean the dude that destroyed u in the 1-2
aight
bars need so much work to fix em, all the legends together wouldn't manage
u got so many fault lines but ones even chyeaah wouldn't predict to cause damage
cool

not real familiar wit Spoken... topical head?
a couple bars wit potential but corpse on the ground, 10-50 posts, etc were no good
lotto had light on the spoke as lotb. coulda been worded better but still solid.
a couple other jabs but enough to take it in my opinion

v/ Lotto Smirk

10-18-2015, 07:40 PM	#1
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766208	Uve got a way with words that's got voters in a bind for jokes, Cus the way they were on LSD... got me thinking they were overdosed. execution was weak but decent concept here U prolly like what's with all these nameflip... this shit is a dud, But im just puttin emphasis on a flip like Jose Bautista wit the home run. okay.... vs. ain't noticed u poor bastard, act like u live that life but can't afford a car lets get it right only time the light'll be on spoke is if this poor bastard has to travel anywere at night lol I could pick apart ur style so don't act like u dope n u the don too u struggle with flo n I don't mean the dude that destroyed u in the 1-2 aight bars need so much work to fix em, all the legends together wouldn't manage u got so many fault lines but ones even chyeaah wouldn't predict to cause damage cool not real familiar wit Spoken... topical head? a couple bars wit potential but corpse on the ground, 10-50 posts, etc were no good lotto had light on the spoke as lotb. coulda been worded better but still solid. a couple other jabs but enough to take it in my opinion v/ Lotto Smirk __________________