Freedom in Debt

Dove Dozer · 05-03-2013, 11:20 PM

I loved how this flowed. I thought it was fluid .. but maybe its how it reads a little weird, like where i ended my bars they werent on the end. But as i was reading it with some swag, it has a nice cadence to it. So i enjoyed that aspect alot. Id like to hear how you intended for it to sound so record it sometine.. i like deep topics like this. On some conscious vibe. Definitely feeling the content. Good work bro. Keep the pen moving.

05-03-2013, 11:20 PM	#10
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	I loved how this flowed. I thought it was fluid .. but maybe its how it reads a little weird, like where i ended my bars they werent on the end. But as i was reading it with some swag, it has a nice cadence to it. So i enjoyed that aspect alot. Id like to hear how you intended for it to sound so record it sometine.. i like deep topics like this. On some conscious vibe. Definitely feeling the content. Good work bro. Keep the pen moving. __________________